I'm so glad you put hermione with harry! I always thought they should be together

I wish it wasn’t hermioneXharry but other than that everything else is good, idk why but their relationship really sets me off

Warn people! It is a dirty rotten evil trick to suddenly turn this into a riddle solving fic at chapter 30. I'm so disappointed. You could have turned it into a horrible song-fic, and I would be equally frustrated, because I'm losing all interest in reading, even though the first 29 chapters were OK.

LOL. Good surprise! Great sense of anticipation.

I really enjoyed this story, but I am a bit confused at what Snape did to the Dursley's. What did happento them?

Ooooh cool I just love it that you used a black panther as his animagus form!

There aren't any bears in England!

wth is half missing

This fanfic is really brilliant! Hope I would find a sequel.

uhm... HP taking place in the UK and all, a bit of research would not be amiss... bears and wolves were eradicated centuries ago in the UK. I think badgers and foxes is about as dangerous as it gets.

I found this story yesterday, started reading it and couldn't stop! This was a superb job of writing and I am looking forward to reading much more of your writing in the years to come! You are definitely a Wordsmith; your gift of making your characters interact so well with each other is part of what made them seem so genuine and real
Also, your descriptions of the people, places, and everything in the story were responsible for creating the movie set in my head and running the movie version of the story play out in my mind. Thank you for the fantastic work you did writing this!

I really enjoying the story so far got one bone going to pick and maybe there was an explanation butbI'm sorry if sirius annulled the marriage ok so what? If i were lilly i would have lived in freaking sin I would be like that's fine we're not married I don't care I'm still with the man I love you can't change that!

Of all I read so far I think the last paragraph really touch me.

YEAH!
Thank u for getting the Dursely's back for what they have done. Looking forward to finding out what the curses were he did. (Just a reminder you do know in your story Lily isn't blood relation in any way! Lily is Sirius twin)
Also looking forward to Drako, the coward whelp is going 2 get his.
Thanks for the entertainment.

I am confused as 2 why Harry lied to Snape about Drako and his a-holes attacking him. I really hate it when Harry plays/played the cowered and let others beat on him and do not have the courage to tell someone that cares about him. He is just setting himself up to continue being a bullies whipping post.
I mean u can understand to a point but Snape has more then earn his trust at this point in your story.
It makes me wish I could slap HP and tell him to have a bit more courage and then slap him again and ask him if he likes being lied to?
I like your story Love Snape but I hope you do have Harry using his brain and stop being a dang willing whipping post.