After re-reading this I gotta ask: did Viola insinuate that Johannes has exhibitionist tendencies in the last paragraph?

How the hell did I not realize there was a sixth chapter?! Oh man after letting the last five sit in my head for a few days and now reading the last chapter this feels like such a satisfying, open ending. I am desperate for more! Yet another itch in my journey through the world of fanfiction whose desires are unyielding and unceasing...

It's so rare nowadays to find a fic that rubs me so rightly to the point where I MUST login and add this to my fave list. Rare it is for a fic to scratch my itch so well and leave me satisfied.

You broke my streak of two months of wading through the quagmire of unsatisfactory fics! THANK YOU!

Ah, I've seen you've wrapped up your latest symphony in a cornucopia of literary mastery. Obviously such troubles wouldn't befallen the characters if they didn't misplace such silly, childish notions in Arceus; an obvious imaginary figment of adult imagination. But I digress, go forth in your atheistic progressions my fellow liberated libertarian.

Obviously there was opportunity to have a three-way pokeman human fuckfest and you dropped the ball, hard. I will be unfollowing, unliking and unsubscribarinoing.

This was great! I kinda want to see Viola be more romantic to Johannes.

Holy shit guy, this is a very enjoyable read. Very, very well done!

Things definitely got more interesting with that conflict.

As a stanch reader I must say, I was disappointed with a lack of fluffy sweaters involved in this story. Your last story particularly resonated with me when warm and comfy clothing was placed upon cutiepie pokemans. For shame! As repentance I demand you put *at least* forty sweaters on Viola in your next installment; Johannes, for his part, may don a keyhole sweater himself.

As a Gardevoir lover, I can't help but love this story so far. As a fellow Gardevoir writer, you have my support. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So far it's been a quite difficult, but fun read for me. I admit I've got trouble reading your story without google in a seperate tab to check on a few words but hey, it helps helps me learning so I won't complain.

Also I already love Talia. I have no idea why, though.

This one believes gardevoir's dialogue is annoying

I find your wild and untempered use of thick upper apparel to be both stimulating and utterly devoid of the proper civilized sensibilities. May you proceed in further ventures designed around such woolly clad temptresses attempting floppy aerial take-off.

How you could get away with such articulate depictions of wanton digit caressing and ill-fated coitus purely for the purpose of procreation is beyond me. I hope your efforts to drag down the high brow establishment of the internet halts here! The nerve of some people!

How you could get away with such articulate depictions of wanton digit caressing and ill-fated procreation [i]purely[/i]