| Reviews for Luffy takes the Iron Throne |
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MadClawDragon chapter 7 . 6/24 Never knew such a master piece exists... Great job man |
Hoans chapter 8 . 6/23 Hope Francky make Usopp cyborg fingers with different kind of gadgets/weapons in them! |
Hoans chapter 7 . 6/23 I didn't watch GoT but i've a little about different characters so... If the Night King is dead then shouldn't the White Walkers all die and crumble too?! And since there are still WWs roaming on the shore does that mean that the Night King is still alive, but wounded?! |
Hoans chapter 6 . 6/22 Luffy a little scared?! Zorro tired after 2-3 shots?! Nami terrified she can't move and need a kid to get out?! Usopp Abandoning his Nakamas?! Dude If you didn't watch OP then don't write about it! WTF man?! Luffy is never affraid of anything but only excited! Zorro is a F*cking Monster stamina-wise! Nami can literally obliterate those zombies with Lightning! Usopp shots are practically like cannon balls and he can also shot fire attacks! You don't seem to understand OP world that much! Don't forget they have all seen different kind of horror like Robin who saw her own island being destroyed, Nami, with arlong and others killing villagers from Cocoyashi Village etc... I mean yeah, what is shown in the anime only seems like comedy and all but they lived in this corrupt world for decades and have seen a lot of horrors during their travel it's just that it wasn't shown in the anime! Really disappointed in this chapter! Why bothering to make a crossover of OP and GoT if you nerff the SH crew?! |
BlitzNeutral69 chapter 32 . 3/31 ... whyyyyyyy?! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/2 Honestly the Nami part made the chapter bad |
LoveLifeForever chapter 18 . 10/26/2019 You know, I was enjoying the story for the first couple of chapter. Then you nerfed the Straw Hats so the White Walker fight wouldn't be a curb stomp battle. I mean you already took a crew that dealt with thousands of men wielding guns and cannons and turned them into a group that had trouble with unskilled mindless zombies! They're like a pretty weak version of those Black Cat Pirate mooks Luffy took out on Usopp's island... you know, the one almost at the very START OF THE STORY! And now you gave Ramsay a Devil Fruit. You've pulled a plot device out of your ass to give them a worthy opponent for... reasons? They didn't need it any harder! Anyway, I'm out before you give Euron Greyjoy the Water Water Fruit or something equally nonsensical. Like your story, I'm just tired of watching the same formula play out. It's boring. Kind of sad, though. Nerfing the crew the way you did gave a lot of promise if you just eliminated the Gaon Cannon somehow. Not like it'd make less sense than spontaneously leveling the durability stats. |
TheeLoreMaster chapter 19 . 10/3/2019 Hi. Once again, I know this doc is dead as fuck and you probably won’t ever read this. But I need to get it off my chest anyways. Firstly, this is an interesting fic, and I like it. I also like how having Ramsey have Ace’s fruit may solve Luffy’s hesitation in killing. Or at least, in this kill, anyways. That said, if the devil fruits are showing up now...why now? I mean, Westeros hasn’t seen devil fruits before, and now they got what? 4? 5? Just for the Balton’s. If you have a whole bunch flood in when there was none, in such rapid succession, it brings up a massive question mark on why nobody around here has seen them before. Of course, this doesn’t have to be a plot hole. You could actually make this be a cool plot significant event. In fact, if you really wanted to be able to extend this story (which you won’t, since it’s dead) you could have had someone in the past put up some kind of barriers around Westeros that are slowly breaking down. Don’t know how it would work, but it would explain the normal magnetism in the grand line, the straw hats miraculously getting there for no reason, and the sudden emergence of both devil fruits and haki. This barrier could’ve been put up in the Lost Century (tie ins to OP Lore.). If you really wanted to have some fun, you could have something like the world government was combatted to contain the Targaryens and Westeros, and Westerosians used to have devil fruits and Haki and stuff before the barrier came up and blocked it all away, as well as any connections with the outside world. The walls fully fall by the time Luffy becomes King, and the Log Pose sets. Meanwhile, Dragons and Targaryens are back, and the World Government looks to wage war. And if the world government wants to end Westeros anyway, why not let Luffy transform them into a Pirate Nation that contains the Strawhat Grand Fleet (Westeros edition) while Luffy sets off to obtain his second Kingship. |
TheeLoreMaster chapter 7 . 10/3/2019 Man looking at when this story was makes me feel weird. Was dressrosa really 4 years ago? Holy shit. Leaving a review at this point is probably pointless and will go unnoticed, but I’m going to anyways. I was reading you go over other peoples reviews. I’ve never actually seen GoT, and while through crossovers and wikis I’ve learned a lot about some of the family’s and the politics and stuff, I’m still without a clue where the white walkers are concerned. So I can’t really comment on the powers. Also, nice job not pulling a “The One Piece Writers” on us and forgetting about the drawbacks of Gear 3. I’d totally forgotten that the mini drawback existed it’s been so long. As for Nami and Usopp running...I can’t say it’s out of character too much. But I don’t think Nami would’ve retreated all the way to the Sunny. I think she would’ve at least hovered around the shore so she could pick her friends up if they were on the retreat or so Luffy could slingshot his way on board like he always does. Nami may run, but not to the point where it’s like she’s abandoning everybody else. Not in a situation so dangerous. That’s the odd part. Yes, Nami and Usopp run. But when it’s at its most dangerous, they don’t. They help the others. They only run when it’s enough to threaten them but not the others. |
GuitarBOSS chapter 2 . 7/7/2019 Usopp stops calling him "captain Usopp" when he returns to the crew after his failed mutiny. Did you stop reading One Piece the instant they left Water 7? |
GuitarBOSS chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Why is Robin calling people by their ship positions? She stops doing that after Luffy tells her to live at Enies Lobby. |
Sixes chapter 6 . 4/7/2019 What am I reading? Luffy and the crew have seen insane shit but freeze up after seeing some zombies? This is rough |
Rhikter chapter 4 . 4/7/2019 You are aware Luffy has legitimately murdered people right? In the manga he literally fucking kills some Marines by tossing explosives back at them. Your kind of making the crew look like pussies compared to Arya despite the fact that: Robin is an ex assassin Chopper mentioned someone died while he operated on them Zoro cut out his own fucking eye (enough said) Luffy saw his brother die and has killed in self defense before Sanji has kicked a guys fucking teeth out. Franky has outright mentioned killing Nami used to fucking mug people and leave them for dead |
Sixes chapter 3 . 4/7/2019 Honestly I'm not sure what you are trying to make Arya but I'm really starting to dislike her |
TurboKid96 chapter 29 . 3/14/2019 Though none of the original Straw Hats knew him as well, Ghost was as much a member of the crew as they were. It was touching to see they were heartbroken by his passing as well. |