Great AU story! The universe you created is very captivating, and some twists using the cannon are great (Elizabeth's anklet, Neal being the one shot by Keller on the heist that went wrong etc). Thankfully, having discovered the story after it was completed, I do not have to wait for the continuation of it so I'm diving into the next one straight away! Thank you for your great work! x

I hope that the forms Mozzie found also show that his parents refused the money. Maybe they were locked up too, for mental reasons, thinking their son was human. Or at least his mother.

Just finished reading this story, and you wove an excellent tale. Such a heartbreaking story. What an exploration into both the darker side of human nature as well as the light... I loved how you kept the core personalities intact for each of the canon characters. This was a brilliantly executed AU. Brava!

I want to protect you Peter. Neal wants to protect you. El wanted to protect you. ;-; ah -Cas.

I keep getting the feeling that Taylor is Peter's dad or brother or something. -Cas.

Slight fourth wall break XD nice.

I was about to say sit on the edge of the bed before standing up before I remembered he had already been doing that. After my ablation I almost passed out twice just going to the toilet and back to the hospital bed. Let me just say, not fun. Losing my hearing for any period of time is a big problem for me.

Yep. That's exactly what happened to me. Blood pressure plummeted, vision went black, lost my hearing, and felt myself start swaying. Not fun at all. Granted yours is just black vision, Peter, but still.

For some reason I don't think he'd mind you ruining his life Peter. -Cas.

I WAS WRONG. I WAS SO WRONG. CANVAS BAG. NOT CANVAS BAG. MEANING A BAG MADE OF CANVAS NOT A BAG FOR CANVAS. OOPS.

I'm suddenly seeing similarities between this and Home, a Teen Wolf fanfic I'm reading that's very stressful and the main character moves in with another character after his dad dies and fights depression. By chapter fifteen he's all better though. It's not rushed, the chapters are just long. Maybe 15-20k words each. I don't know. Somewhere around there. And there's pictures. It's on AO3. Also, really glad Moz had the sense to leave the device.

Hydrogen peroxide Neal, breaks the blood down just as it cleans wounds.

Cries because the ending of this chapter was cute. Don't ask. I just find it cute. -Cas.

Of course it's painting supplies. Duhh. Also, I'm not entirely sure if this is Neal/Peter or if it's just friendship. I'm fine either way lol, it's just that I found it in one of the community things with a Neal/Peter story so I'm not sure. At this rate it could go either way. -Cas.

He sent Moz to get a collar!? Wait. I might be wrong. I swear.

When he said adrenalin I instantly thought Firefly. Everything is a huge reference to something else with me.

Aaaaand there's the hint of married couple bickering they always have XD -Cas

RENNER YOU MONSTER. YOU CHANGED THE WORD TO LOVE DIDNT YOU. I WILL SLAM A TABLE ON YOUR HEAD.

THAT MONSTER. ITS EVEN WORSE. ILL GUT HIM LIKE A FISH.

Peter... He's not collaring you. -Cas.

No. Fight Peter. Live. -Cas.

Rules are boring anyway. -Cas.

Hope the vet comes soon. Probably in the next chapter lol but I like at least dropping a piece of mind at the end of each chapter lol. -Cas.

I love having my hair pet, would definitely help to calm me down. Also this entire time I've been imagining the slashes as - and I rather than / which is a bit rediculous but I very often confuse diagonal and horizontal and vertical. I'm actually still confused as to which is right but I believe you've said diagonal which would be / but I wouldn't put money on it. -Cas.

Okay I haven't finished reading the chapter yet, I've gotten to the part whereBeal decides he'll give Peter some options on food. I'm going to jump and say Neal suggests Italian and Peter will either perk up of something that gives Neal the idea of getting Italian.

Oh no. The ruined band looks like a collar. Neal you idiot!

And Moz probably assumes that Neal is in danger. Oh well. Just stitch Peter up, make him better. -Cas.