| Reviews for bite down hard, bite down |
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   ChuckleBunny chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 SO. WELL. WRITTEN. and super hot haha. I can FEEL the pained and sexual tension between Maka and Soul, and I love the crazy battle going on in Maka's head. Keep it up, I'd love to read more works! |
| freyja0taku chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Aw. The beginning successfully pinched my heart while the end melted me. It's great! :3 |
| dearlambie chapter 1 . 1/24/2017 This was amazing. Your writing is so wonderful and sexy, and I love it when the smut is relevant to an actual story, you handled that so well. :) |
| Gothic Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Great one-shot! |
| MandereLee chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 Oh, this fic really gripped my heart. I felt for Maka so much. I can totally understand her dilemma, and it's a testament to your great writing that you can demonstrate both her longing and her hesitance in a way that *makes sense*. Thanks for writing! |
| LightSpeed Athlete24 chapter 1 . 5/6/2016 I really... really love this. One of the best SoulMaka smuts I've ever read. :'D |
| Cree chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 oh my damned fucking sweet jesus... this... this is just pure perfection the emotions, the thoughts, everything just seemed so in character, it really blew my mind at how perfectly this was written! There was not even a milisecond where I wasn't absolutely stunned and awestruck at how real,how relatable and how godddamn right you interpreted and wrote both of them (AS IF IT WAS YOU WHO CREATED THEM JUST LITERALLY HOLY FUCK) and I don't even know what else to say anymore without just rambling over my mindblownness, this (and all your other se fics that I read so far but haven't commented on yet) just stole all the words I wanted to say out of my mouth when my mind became completely blank over the perfectly paced rush of emotions you made me feel while reading through those lines aND I SHOULD NOT EVEN START ON THE ILLEGALLY PERFECT HOLY PIECE OF SMUTTY GREATNESS YOU HAVE THERE, SWEET DEATH YOU WERE TRYING TO KILL ME, WERE YOU *bows far too deeply than needed* I shall praise you as a god(/ess) pf the Soma fanfictions, makapedia-sama! |
| Weregirl96 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015 absolutely beautiful. I love everything about it. You did an AWESOME job |
| Scythe Rose chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 Wow, this was so beautiful and well-written. You really captured both Soul and Maka's characters. It was so delicate and sensual and beautiful. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 Can I favorite this more than once? |
| insomniasucks chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 Its 4 am and im in love |
| TheSoulReader chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 Oh Jesus Christ, my heart! The beginning of this story legit had me teary. I know those feels. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2015 This was awesome! !#######! |
| chadtayor020 chapter 1 . 6/3/2015 Great emotional and physical romance. |
