| Reviews for Untapped Power? Untapped emotions |
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   Blackmist31 chapter 19 . 5/18/2017 there were few things you wrote that didnt maje sense. Maokai isnt allied to the other champions of the shadow isles. he fights them to save the forest. You didnt count the black mist that attacks anything alive and devours it. |
| Mina Phantonhive chapter 4 . 8/21/2016 That was such a cute kiss...and Zed...grabing the butt at the beggining of making out...man...you should wait a little. |
| Mina Phantonhive chapter 1 . 8/21/2016 Wow! Amazing chapter. Syndra just showed him how it is! D |
| burner-burner chapter 17 . 8/9/2016 AMAZING SNEPIA GLASHUR |
| burner-burner chapter 11 . 8/9/2016 Hi Brontosenpai It's me again! Great chapter! I understand this was wrote almost 8 months ago, but I would like to say to write longer chapters on your current stories. Thanks! Glashur |
| burner-burner chapter 2 . 8/9/2016 HEY SENPAI I LOVE YOUR WRITING BUT PLEASE MAKE CHAPTERS LONGER OKAY? :) |
| Faisal chapter 19 . 6/11/2016 So are you going to complete the fan fiction? Or are you gonna be a d1ck and leave us with this horrible cliffhanger |
| Galaxy Knight chapter 19 . 10/8/2015 ... you better continue it. If Syndra died and that was it, you would have hell to pay. |
| ThaKumiho chapter 19 . 10/7/2015 This fic was a great one. A special take at the classic syndraxzed |
| Galaxy Knight chapter 16 . 10/6/2015 No! Not Hei-An! She's cute and she makes a good friend for both Syndra and Zed. But... if you do end up killing her off all I ask is that she goes out in a blaze of glory. |
| Happy Jinxmas chapter 17 . 9/23/2015 I must see more this is awesome |
| Galaxy Knight chapter 15 . 7/27/2015 Man Zed is having hard time letting go of his ghosts from the past. I thought that Syndra would be able to convince him to change but I guess I was wrong. |
| Galaxy Knight chapter 14 . 7/23/2015 I repeat: please please please PLEASE! Don't have Zed kill Shen, i'd hate to see what would happen if he does and I fear his clan and Syndra may have to pay the prices... also Zed would probably lose his humanity. |
| Galaxy Knight chapter 13 . 7/16/2015 Man I hope this meeting goes well, the slaughter of any ninjas of great kill would be a huge waste. |
| UnpopularOpinion chapter 5 . 7/16/2015 I gave this a read because I really like this pairing, but it's not really my cup of tea. The pacing of the text and the writing is good, but I find the characters too OOC and their relationship lacking depth and buildup. Next time consider giving it more time to flesh out the characters and the story, so it would feel less rushed. I hope you have fun writing the story and wish you the best of luck, but I don't think you'll find many readers with this type of instalove. |
