Maybe it was not such a good idea to listen to the song before reading because while I did, all that sounded in my head was that tune and I was like "Right, I'm supposed to be reading'". Didn't expect the song or the story to be like this, I was thinking more of an angsty thing! XD! (Your fault for making me suffer so much).

So you just started to write fanfiction?I thought that you had been doing it for years!

NAWWW! That would so be Percy! He's so in character it's incredible! ~myawfod

Awww that was so sweet! Percy is so sweet 3 why can't guys in reality be like that? Anyway, I loved this :)

That was so sweet! Please right another!

Ahh nah honey I good... Man I love that song and this and you for new writer you sure are good :)

Aww...

Wow.
I came here cause you favorited me and I make it a goal to check out the writing of those who favorite me (it's a strange system, don't question it :)) and this was...
So. Good.
It's a drabble, sure, and not overly deep and emotional and all that, but I feel like I'm in the scene with the characters and it helps that all your characters are so amazingly well written.
Some authors make Percy overly harsh in his rejections of other girls; others make him so nice he's practically flirting. Still others make the girl the evil queen-but not you. I give you kudos.
...wrong website?
Seriously, I read about Angela for about five hundred words and already I feel like I know her; or, at least, the her you're writing about.
It's not the kind of fan fiction I usually read, but I had to leave a review.
And that last line...amazing.
Thanks for posting this!

Jo

Liked the story, loved the song