| Reviews for 50 Shades of Orange |
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Guest chapter 4 . 11/2/2019 Please update Please update Your story 's great So u ought to update! |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2019 Please please please update. I seriously wanna know what happens in the story next. Your story is really awesome. I just hope I'm not too late and you haven't given up on this story completely. So once again, PLEASE UPDATE! |
Milliemoo chapter 4 . 3/8/2019 Woah this is seriously great. You've put so much effort into so many different aspects of this story so kudos on including such interesting elements. This is really beautifully constructed (obviously) and I can see a lot of plot potential. Its super funny too! Not sure if you'll continue the fic but I really hope you do because I'm so interested in how you'll continue and it looks like a LOT of effort went in to composing this so far. If you don't keep going with this fic then I've still gotta congratulate you on making me so eager to read more after just four chapters, great writing. |
GabZ chapter 4 . 8/6/2015 Pleasee update sooon! |
Blazedoll chapter 4 . 7/4/2015 A very interesting story. I like the way you are building up the split and all the characters are do much fun to read. You have set them such nicely with the setting, it almost seems natural. |
DragonSlavee chapter 4 . 7/2/2015 nice to know how big Tala is now I can picture it mmm yes nice very nice yes... And Kais bubble butt! I just wanna squish all that meat hehe oh Bryan let me lick your sweat! ok I need to stop I sound so thirsty |
BrintySelf chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 lol Tala was so disappointed maybe next time! I see you Bryan you want to keep kai for yourself, not that is your fault |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 AAAAAAAH Kai's cats! :D Cat Dranzer sounds so cute :3 |
Superrbia chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 thanks for the update the story is starting to grown on me |
Kiscia chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 Tala was all ready for the big event and tomado for cats? Well ok I guess. Nice chapter |
MasterExpose chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 Cant wait to see their reactions when they find out Kai's the same person they keep talking about. Bryan is so sweet with Kai he will go crazy when the times come. The height are ok anyways, since G-rev. it was know Kai is rather short around the russians and I love it, I like shorty kai is cute |
Jorbimon chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 I want a sneakily sweet Tala too q_q |
MasterExpose chapter 3 . 6/16/2015 We will get Talas POV next thats good we can see what he think and how he expects to get kais attention |
Superrbia chapter 3 . 6/15/2015 thanks for the chapter uh oh of course I would adopt Kai since hes my favorite |
Kiscia chapter 3 . 6/15/2015 I'm so bad at history so I was reading like fast that part until my eyes lighted up because Bryan and Tala came around. Dont be sad Tala you going an hotel with Kai, who seems to be font of you already! |