Good story. Maybe you can finish it someday.

It's been a long time since I watched "Chuck," so my memory of its final episode is a bit hazy, other than the fact I didn't care that much for the final episode. Since I have enjoyed the author's Sarah Connor Chronicles fan fiction I decided to give this story a try. I am glad I did. I liked the first chapter.
I plan to read the chapters slowly, in that I do not expect the author to add any more Chuck fan fix other than what he did some time ago.

I like the idea of the story... I just think the idea that Ellie could help is stupid. And that Chuck thought she could help. She is a neurologist, she knows about the brain and has worked on adding several features to the Intersect. But she does not really know anything about the Intersect, how it actually works and what it does exactly. The work she did on the Intersect was just adding a few ajustmunts to a program already fully developed by her Father. Hell the computer did all the actual adjustmebts, she just said where it could be adjusted and a few improvkents to make it work more compatible with say a brain then an actual mechanical computer. And yet for some reason in this story she seemingly knows everythong about the Intersect and can even go far enough to isolate cwrtain images that contain a virus out of tens of thosounds that have been recorded in the brain... Thats even more then the actual creator who had worked on the intersect for more than 20 year could do. But other than that I think kt is great... it just should have been Chuck doing most of the Intersect work. He is the computer guy and when you get down to it the Intersect is a computer... although the show is a bit controversial when it comes to that. The intersect changes from a data bank with a form of search engine, to a data bank that has its own programs, it can be cancelled out or blocked over... My one problem witht hw show is that the Intersect changes like... 50 times

Please come back and add more chapters to this

A very sharp twist in the story. Waiting for the next chapter!

Really good continaution

Ahh New beginning, much different than others Ive read. Looking forward to more, appears to be a great start!

Alrighty then. It would appear we have taken a turn into the Twilight Zone. Can't say I'm not curious though. Let's see where we go. Good job.

Well, that was...interesting. Did not see it coming AT ALL. Like you said though, it's not like the show wasn't full of the implausible. My interest remains.

Setting up some nice tension in this one. Well done.

Great action filled chapter. I'm loving the twist and so no problem with me suspending dis-belief. Really well done. I always liked Cameron anyway.

OK, I can understand her motivations I guess. Another well crafted chapter. Thanks.

Good little bit of action here. Nicely done.

This is exactly the thing she shouldn't be doing. They are a team. They're better that way. Always have been. Every time one of them tries to do the solo thing to spare the other the frap hits the can. Foolish woman.

Neo-nazis? Interesting. Solid chapter but I have to reiterate my previous thoughts on the Verbanski character. I'm just not feeling her. The rest of the story is great though.