| Reviews for Under a Pale shattered moon |
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Uday Sra chapter 9 . 4/26 good |
Malgrath chapter 6 . 4/14 Aw, the Doll is adorable. |
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 2 . 1/20 Why would he give a fuck about what Cardin thinks of him, he’s lived through Bloodborne lol |
UrpsychoEX chapter 3 . 12/29/2019 This story was interesting. It led me to look up a lot of Bloodborne info. However this leads me to a few conclusions. 1) Abel is from one of the worst play-throughs that could happen. Everything that could go wrong seems to have gone wrong. I mainly mean NPC deaths as Eileen doesn't have to die if you do things right, according to the wiki. Same goes with a few other NPCs. 2) Ozpin is way the hell to accepting of Abel's clear EXPERIENCE in killing people and the interaction between them, as well as Abel agreeing to join them, is a bit to rushed. Grimm attack animals yes, but regular game does still exist. Abel shouldn't have been starving in the middle of the Emerald Forest, which is the only place I can figure he could be. 3) Final point: I made it 8 paragraphs into this chapter and now I'm going to walk away. Abel at half speed, according to you, is faster than Ruby with her Semblance... Yeah no thanks. I'll be the first to admit I don't like where RWBY went after halfway through season 3 and RT can't seem to figure out if Ruby has a speed semblance or can fly/teleport. But the main character of the other half of your crossover, who is built around her Semblance, and your Bloodborne Hunter is at least twice as fast as she is at her peak? No thanks. Ruby has ridiculous speed and you looked at Abel and said "Hold my beer!" I'm honestly a little sad that I won't continue reading as the Bloodborne game seemed interesting in the context of the lore. I'll never play the game, nor Dark Souls, as I like myself to much for that level of frustration. But I wish you well with your stories. You did well in keeping spelling and grammar mistakes to a minimum, if I saw any, and you seem to have something of a plot in mind for the crossover. Good luck! |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/19/2019 Aura you yet again forgot thet hunters wont get bloodied from one hit. |
PieKnight chapter 9 . 7/27/2019 Great story! This is my favorite RWBY/Bloodborne crossover. I really like the way you write and how Able speaks. It really gets across how able is from a different land without being difficult to read. The character interactions are great too. I'm enjoy reading how Able interacts with team RWBY and the Doll. Hopefully you get to update this story someday! |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/8/2019 Hey what happened to your other story about Jaune and Plain Doll in the RWBY x Bloodbourne crossover. That was a good story but it can't be found anymore. |
ksomk chapter 1 . 5/2/2019 "The teenager had little patience for people tying to exert any form of authority on him" Proceeds to submit to authority . |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2019 Of course he immediately subordinate himself to the local arrogant power-hungry chessmaster. Because why have free will, right? |
Heyo chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 "Judas Iscariot was a disciple and one of the original Twelve Disciples of Jesus Christ" Your edgy fuckin OC name is showing friend. Questionable last names aside I'm just happy someone used the doll in a fanfic |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/27/2018 the reason this has not updated is because yang killed the good hunter! |
Ruberforumfree chapter 9 . 12/18/2018 So, is this story abandoned? |
An Indulgent Fellow chapter 1 . 11/12/2018 Good writer, I beg of you to pick up the pen once again and resume your work. This Iscariot's journey has yet to have begun. The players are in motion, the tides of fate is swaying, and now all we need is a narrator to unfold the following turn of events. Abel retains his Yharnemian heritage yet adjusts well to Remnant, a feature that so few stories can balance well. He has earned the loyalty of elite Grimm, perhaps hybrids of Yharnem"s legacy and Remnant's darkness, and can shift the destiny of this world. You have done well in those moments, but we humbly request further INSIGHT into the Eldritch Truth that lays beneath this incomplete story. Let us know what it means to fear the old blood no matter which world we hail from. |
CountOrlok777 chapter 6 . 10/18/2018 i swear, abel reminds me of goku and castiel. |
CountOrlok777 chapter 3 . 10/18/2018 ... abels a vileblood? gonna have to research that. |