| Reviews for The Checkup |
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gravityfallslover34 chapter 3 . 5/10/2019 great ending glad that Peter was able to convince Tommy that he was going to be alright now also returning to his normal self as well |
gravityfallslover34 chapter 2 . 5/10/2019 great chapter and Tommy's personality reminds me of Chuckie which is a interesting personality change for him |
gravityfallslover34 chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 great introduction to this story and i really hope that you can complete the other stories you have on your profile |
Nairobi-Harper chapter 3 . 6/2/2015 Tomorrow is your anniversary! I'll make sure to do something for you about it :) Peter's explanation of a 'coincidence' was excellent, especially for a two 1/2 year old. He's right. So that's why Tommy had been crying! You're almost at 100 stories! We on are proud of ya! |
Nairobi-Harper chapter 2 . 6/2/2015 Wow Rosie, Mary, and Sady are coming to the game :) I think that what Zack said was right. |
Nairobi-Harper chapter 1 . 6/2/2015 I'm glad that there was description, but maybe there was a little too much of it This seems to be changing Tommy already. |
Sovietlollipop chapter 1 . 6/2/2015 Great story! I felt really bad for Tommy though, that sounds like a horrible year for him, |
El Nugget chapter 1 . 6/2/2015 Great start to this story and loved the recap for those who are new to reading your stories of when Tommy is 2 years old. And can't wait to see how Tommy being a cautious health nut plays out too. |