Reviews for The Checkup
gravityfallslover34 chapter 3 . 5/10/2019
great ending glad that Peter was able to convince Tommy that he was going to be alright now also returning to his normal self as well
gravityfallslover34 chapter 2 . 5/10/2019
great chapter and Tommy's personality reminds me of Chuckie which is a interesting personality change for him
gravityfallslover34 chapter 1 . 5/10/2019
great introduction to this story and i really hope that you can complete the other stories you have on your profile
Nairobi-Harper chapter 3 . 6/2/2015
Tomorrow is your anniversary! I'll make sure to do something for you about it :)

Peter's explanation of a 'coincidence' was excellent, especially for a two 1/2 year old. He's right.

So that's why Tommy had been crying!

You're almost at 100 stories! We on are proud of ya!
Nairobi-Harper chapter 2 . 6/2/2015
Wow Rosie, Mary, and Sady are coming to the game :)

I think that what Zack said was right.
Nairobi-Harper chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
I'm glad that there was description, but maybe there was a little too much of it

This seems to be changing Tommy already.
Sovietlollipop chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
Great story! I felt really bad for Tommy though, that sounds like a horrible year for him,
El Nugget chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
Great start to this story and loved the recap for those who are new to reading your stories of when Tommy is 2 years old.

And can't wait to see how Tommy being a cautious health nut plays out too.