last updated was 2016... oh how that hurts. and this fic is just magnificent too. that scene between nami and zoro both crying is just too powerful and i don't think i'm going to ever get over this fic.

damn it.. tears falling out real hard there.
even when the story begin with tragic, I still though this story will be happy once Zoro came back but it's not the case.

This is so tragic. Hope he have better luck and can find his happiness from now on.
It's torturing imagine Zoro go through all that. damn

You convey the emotions well.
Thank you author.

I love this so much but im scared and worried because the dynamic is out of wack and trust isnt where is was and everythings odd!
But i love it
And i wonder where its gonna go

Amazing! And so emotional and well thought out and... just amazing!

gosh, i finally found this fic again after coming across it one time.. never managed to leave a review then...so here goes...

this is one of the best time travel fic in the fandom. what makes it unique from other time travel fics was the fact that its zoro alone who was thrown back in time... normally, it was luffy or ace and while i love the two brothers to a T, this one is refreshing and awesome. i am not saying it because the main character is one of my favorites but because it has a plot that could be explored further.

and vivi's significance in the latter chapter was wonderful, her being resolved to become a straw hat to protect luffy and zoro. i love that she is becoming d voice of reason for zoro in a way, and although limited to what she could divulge, its cool that she was helping in a different way.

hope this fic. is not dead and that you will find your. muse again to continue this story...

take care..

You know I have an idea for Thriller Bark, Zoro could ask Kuma to transfer the scars of Nami to him, that's match the persona you create, no?

ahh, it is already year from last update:(

Hi you were at one point a member of Team Dragon Star and a contributor to Shattered Existence so I really hope that you will continue the story since it was so amazing! I'm looking forward to more chapters!

Nami's a cartographer... Please tell me there was no lasting nerve damage to her hands or arms. Please?

If Mihawk's venting now, instead of just killing time, would he be a bit more aggressive against Krieg, to the point where they are all wiped out in the Grand Line, not chasing him back to the Baratie?

Spent the last day rereading this fic. It's still one of the best One piece fics out there. And the depth you have provided Zoro is amazing. I adore that Vivi will be joining the group for she was always one of my favorite characters and I wish she had been around for the long game. Please update soon, I am dying to see what the crew does next.

My gosh! I really love this story!

I really like the resolution. Guess now is the time to start a reread. ;)

I stumbled in this fic mostly by accident but I haven't been able to do anything but read since I found it. I adore the changes you've made to the cannon plot and the inner look into how Zoro is handling it all. I can't wait for the next update and want to thank you for giving a glimmer of hope of seeing my ultimate rare pair(at least interact if not have a romance) Zoro/Vivi.

That...is not going to end well...politically...at all.