Two years up to you to continue. Anyone can make their own fic

You could write more on this particular story or even another story with Ash and Eco. You got a natural talent. You really portray them well

Cute little fluff story, but the chapters are way too short. You need to have more content for your plot and character development to take shape. I noticed several errors that are easy to correct, a beta reader would help immensely here.

Over all, it's not bad, but has room for improvement. Keep at it and you will improve. Good luck

Constructive criticisms. The story feels rushed, too little is happening over to long of a time stretch. The relationship between ash and eco is going way to fast. I understand if you want your characters ooc but there isn't a development to it. Try slowing down the pace fleshing out the world and interactions more. Maybe try planning out what you want to happen. Let the scene play out in your head maybe? Then try putting it into words. Your just missing depth to the story. Now after saying that, I like what your doing. Dragoner Academy is one of my favorite animes. Thank you for writing this, you picked a good starting point to diverge from. Keep going with this, please.

This is a good story and dragonar academy is one of my favorite anime.