| Reviews for Mother |
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   SplitsShot chapter 11 . 5/30 Hope you never lose your passion to write and abandon this story again. |
| iHateFridays chapter 11 . 5/29 Ooh yay another chap! Can’t wait for more :D |
| GiGitheHedgehog chapter 11 . 5/27 Ooh this was so good! I'm looking forward to what comes next. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/10/2019 Great! I generally don't see anything about the story that I don't like. I've been musing about writing something similar but I could't come up with any good explanation as to how Tamiya Ryoko/ Tamura Reiko survived. Just my irrelevant personal opinion here: I'm (probably) one of those subtitle elitists that prefer subtitles for cultural reasons. Some of the expressions sounded very American/ British and so did the naming system (first names before surnames as opposed to the reverse) . Basically, the story felt like it was being written by a native English speaker (which it probably was). My brain kept getting confused because I'm going into this expecting a Japanese story with Japanese cultural vibes but I keep running into expressions that seem foreign to the story. I really don't know if there's anything you can do about it but it really does't matter much. It just made reading a little uncomfortable for me, but I enjoyed the story nonetheless. Please ignore me if you want and carry on. Thanks. |
| JaphetSkie chapter 10 . 5/12/2019 Now this is interesting. I'll follow and favorite this, so UPDATE! :D |
| GiGitheHedgehog chapter 10 . 3/5/2019 Nice to see an update. Now for my review: I'm not following what's going on. I understand the first part of the chapter, but I have no idea what the context is for the second half. It doesn't follow up on the end of the last chapter at all. I'm very confused. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/25/2019 AHHHHHH WRITE MORE CHAPTERS PLEZ |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/25/2019 Amazing |
| HelenTheMoon chapter 10 . 2/23/2019 Well, here's a fanfic I had completely forgotten about. |
| Dracozion chapter 9 . 11/3/2018 Im enjoying the story so far and am eagerly awaiting the next update. Good job. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2018 Hey! Just wanted to say that this story is awesome! Its so great and i wish to see more from this story. The story got me very intrigued and i just can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon! :) |
| TieUO chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Veri n1c3DAnst0riER |
| 4gz3o chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Veri n1c3NORst0rijl |
| GiGitheHedgehog chapter 9 . 4/20/2018 I look forward to it. This was obviously a fluff chapter so I don't have much to say, but I reread chapter 8 to refresh my memory, and I tell you that it was awesome. |
| A Strange Bird Indeed chapter 8 . 12/30/2017 I love it. I really fucking love it. And I'm so so happy you brought Migi back! |
