| Reviews for The Tale of The Magic Prince |
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melcerena chapter 16 . 12/11/2016 Amazing story! It's been a while since a story grabed my attention right from the first chapter... right from the first few paragraphs lol Thank you so much for this! I really enjoyed it a lot :3 The only little tip I can provide is that maybe you could some time check the spelling u.u there were many times it averted my focuss lol prob it was just me but I still wantes to say something hehe Again, awesome job and thanks for sharing! -Mel |
LovelyLadyMindings chapter 16 . 11/30/2016 Ahhhh this is so cute! I loved the little parallels to the beauty and the beast! But you tweaked it enough to make it quite original! Wonderful! Although there were definitely a few grammar issues (tenses, spelling), I still quite enjoyed reading this! |
Agauger chapter 16 . 10/4/2016 any progress on the sequel? this is the first inuyasha fan fic i read and i LOVED it! |
sandywai chapter 16 . 9/30/2016 Very beautiful story I love this story a lot It just makes me read this one over and ovet I can't wait to read your sequal of the magic Prince Love it x3 |
Jay chapter 16 . 8/16/2016 I'm glad I finally read this story. I'd seen it before but never got around to it. I really liked your take on this & can honestly say I haven't read one similar which is refreshing. There are areas that could benefit from a little editing, mostly with spelling, but otherwise I loved this story! |
Jay chapter 15 . 8/16/2016 Another well done chapter. I actually like that she didn't say yes right away. |
Jay chapter 14 . 8/16/2016 I think this was the shortest chapter in this story so far. It was good but I wanted her to say something in private to him about just being a "companion" so they could decide what they are. |
Jay chapter 13 . 8/16/2016 I think you did a splendid job on this chapter. I'd been waiting for her to show up & really enjoyed her tale. |
Jay chapter 12 . 8/15/2016 I thought this chapter was well done & I enjoyed your approach to his sword. |
Jay chapter 11 . 8/15/2016 I'm really hoping Koga comes out okay after almost being pinched to death. Really enjoyed the scene between Inu & Naraku, though kinda thought he was a fool for not stealing the jewel when Naraku was down. |
Jay chapter 10 . 8/15/2016 I thought it was a nice show of his ruthlessness having him pinch off the guy's head. If she was better at thinking on her feet she could have said they were no longer together for some reason & given that as her excuse for being there. Great chapter. |
Jay chapter 9 . 8/15/2016 Another great chapter. I though Naraku was made of mostly maggots? Also confused how he eats with no mouth. Nice work! |
Jay chapter 8 . 8/15/2016 I loved this chapter! My favorite so far. I'm curious though why you have so many cat characters. |
Jay chapter 7 . 8/15/2016 I knew Kaede would eventually pass, but I'm still not ready for it. Just when he was really learning happiness again. |
Jay chapter 6 . 8/15/2016 I expected the fight to go on a little longer but I liked the scene where Kagome took charge. A small part of me wonders if he'll have the idea that she went to the dragon while she was missing. |