your oc is to perfect and that makes her boring and unlikable( to me anyways). i understand that, thats kinda what you're going for but its annoying reading about her. still gonna keep reading to see if my mind changes but as of now i dont like her.

Woah! Is this complete? Or is there more? That tension and jealousy was very relatable. We all can pretend in a perfect world we are above it and most stories are so unrealistic about "true love". So far I've enjoyed reading all your stories. Thank you

I really enjoyed this chapter!

Argh stop giving me the feels for Capable. I hope she grows from this experience of envy and regret, and I'm so curious and excited to see what lies in store for her. Is she pregnant? Omg o:

Love this! Thank you for feeding my obsession and you are such a lovely writer. Can't wait to read more! :)

love the new story so far!

This story is great! Very different from anything that's been done with these characters. I can't wait to read the rest!

Liking this story so far!