Reviews for The Hatchling
ElementalMaster16 chapter 24 . 7/15
Cool chapter!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
AustenLux chapter 21 . 6/4
I love this story! But just a comment about what seems to be a plot hole, in this chapter you talk about Harry attending Hogwarts, but didn’t Clint mention earlier that he went to school in LA? Unless you have a time traveling subplot going on that we don’t know about yet.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 5/17
so what happened to wanda? youve practically butchered the characters at this point
ElementalMaster16 chapter 23 . 2/10
well then, I'm all caught up. and it's still a fun story. I look forward to seeing how this mission will develop.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
FreerSpirit chapter 3 . 2/9
Dr. Mikhail Gretniev sounds like Mr. Scratch from Criminal Minds
dogman999 chapter 21 . 2/3
Keep up the good work.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 11 . 9/11/2019
It shit like this that pisses me off in the intelligence community. There are a lot of things in which I would outlaw and I wouldn't give a shit about what any country has to say about it. To put in simple terms change or go to hell no government and their military or intelligence agency will be allowed to do what they want or make rules or laws on their own anymore Every government of the world is required to obey the Heavenly Father YHWH. I know there are a lot of Atheists and Agnostics out their. But there are many people Out there who believe it doesn't matter what any human government thinks because it doesn't matter what we think as individuals. Because in the end to go against God we are dooming ourselves to destruction. As Steve said is truly read the Scriptures relating to all forms of magic sorcery. All practitioners are to be put to death no exceptions. And anyone who refuses to obey and carry out YHWH's laws is to be put to death/executed. As the Bible states the wages of sin is Death. Now sin is disobedience to God The Father and many sins are also crimes. Compare Biblical law to man's Humans Laws and you will notice many matches put the penalties may not. So any Human Government that goes against The Father will be punished when the day comes when The Son our Messiah is sent with the Army of Angels The Governments of the World will pay dearly and so will all the Churches/ Religions of the World that teach Contrary to the Word of God for which Yeshua was the main authorized teacher. Even thou many in the English Speaking work call Jesus. But many find to close to the Name, Zeus.
thehpfan123 chapter 20 . 2/27/2016
I loved it. Please update soon.
lordkommissarstrife chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Good plot and story. I particularly enjoyed harry being MI6. However what put me off was the background story for Harry's undercover mission. An Ex-Green Beret? Last I checked US Army Special forces did not fight for the British. Had you made his undercover military background S.A.S or The Royal Marine Commandos then that would make a lot of sense for his cover story. Other than that great story.
dogman999 chapter 20 . 8/31/2015
Keep up the good work.
Psyka chapter 20 . 8/30/2015
Wow oh wow please update again soon
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 20 . 8/28/2015
Oooh this might be dangerous but oh well
ElementalMaster16 chapter 20 . 8/27/2015
cool chapter!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
Vi38 chapter 20 . 8/26/2015
Good
Wolf Dragon Demon chapter 20 . 8/26/2015
Awesome, loved the ending to this chapter, keep up the good work.
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