Interesting follow-up!

Awesome ending!

I did not see that coming. Excellent work!

Alfred was incredible. You have a few spelling mistakes (bace instead of back) and are missing a couple commas. Otherwise, this was outstanding!

Ugh, I hate you. I only meant to gleam over the story, but it totally sucked me in. Now, I have to read every word. Well done writing this. You have an exciting hook and excellent establishment of relationship with only a few words. You are missing a few commas, but overall this is a solid story so far and I can't wait to read the rest.

This is the second time I read this. It's so good O.o

Wow, that was a roller coaster. Nice story!

Great story: ) I'm glad you finally finished it: )

Okay...I am seriously thinking of what I just read. I read through the entire story and it kept me on my toes the entire way. The plot line was great, the characterization was perfect, everything was so perfect. Please keep writing/typing stories because they are fantastic!

Yeah! Awesome: ) can't wait for the epilogue: )

OH MY GODDD
Thats the biggest plot twist ever! The guy that was meant to cure him, did this to him?! I didnt even expect this! Great job! That idea was awesome

Brilliant!

Amazing turn if events can't wait for the next chapter!

...You know? It actually makes sense that it would be Strange, with his way on manipulating people. Although, I thought both he and Deathstroke would be in on it; with the past of Renegade and because Slade is a trained assassin (who would pass on his knowledge to Dick once the boy is "willing" to be his apprentice), or maybe the Mad Hatter (with his technology to control people) or even Riddler (with his keen mind being close to rival Strange's logic).

Wow just wow...ahhhhhhh! And stick in there! Do not give up, I don't know what you're going through but stay strong okay? You're an awesome person and deserve to be happy, so be happy, Kay? Tootaloo!