enjoyed the premise of Chuck turning down the red test..is there more?

Geez, Sarah could've been a little more compassionate to Chuck since she LOVES him and deep down, she did come for HIM! Only, she's to scared to tell him! Hopefully, Sarah will see what will make her happy...is to be with the nerd she loves!

UPDATE SOONER, PLEASE! :D

Please update soon, love this story!

Very glad you've come back to this story but I need more, more!

Great story! I like it. I hope you continue!

So far I'm really liking this. Good idea, nice AU. And Shaw cot reamed by Beckman! Throw in a bit if Charah and I'm in heaven, lol.

Pretty fun story. Looking forward to more of the journey.
Thanks for writing!

Though this was a pretty horrible time for the show I am enjoying reading this story. From what I read in this chapter "he who shall not be named" seems to be out of the story for now and we don't have to even think about that show killing character for a little bit hopefully. And I do like the whole San Diego Buy More angle to the story. A very effective use of Morgan and Casey both under this new dynamic. Now lets hope Chuck and Sarah can have that blow out argument they seem to be heading for. But that is healthy and during the "misery arc" I would have liked to have seen that kind of blowout. Especially because many times when a couple with that much sexual tension has that kind of blowout it ends up with some very hot and heavy action lol.

This is something I thought Chuck should have done. "Screw you" and just walk off. This story is worth finishing.

That was a nice improvement over previous chapters. You should finish; even if it's just as a writing exercise.

I think you have taken a dark time for Chuck and given it a very interesting twist. Shaw ordering the red test changes things up nicely. I did wonder about Sarah not getting more concerned about where Chuck was, but I think your story is improving with each chapter.

Interesting twist, that Daniel Shaw ordered the Red Test on his own... and that Beckman wasn't aware of it.

Delighted you're back with this story. It's just very different with the current mission in San Diego and I'm really enjoying that aspect. I also like the fact that Sarah's role vis a vis Chuck has been clarified and recognised by the general.

This is getting better IMHO. I must admit, I didn't like the way it started out as it didn't portray Sarah's character the way I view it, but it's getting closer to Sarah now, thanks

Hell yeah she has a headache! She needs to find out where chuck is and go fix their problems. I look forward to more. Thank you.