Reviews for My Mother's Doll
RoseAnne21 chapter 7 . 9/26/2019
This is such a captivating story. I love the way you unravel the plot by pieces, exchanging between past and present to develop the argument. It has bits of romance in a sea of suspense, political tension and supernatural background. It's just gorgeous. This is so different from everything I've written before and I'm crossing my fingers for you to have tons of inspiration and time to finish it. Just for you to know and keep improving your already great style, there are a few typos here and there. Nothing too serious. Thanks for sharing such a great story! Hope to hear from you soon.
Kvhee chapter 7 . 6/25/2019
I will wait for your update... ️
Guest chapter 7 . 6/21/2019
woohooo glad u aunt giving it up !
Kedrane chapter 7 . 6/19/2019
This story is so interesting
CrisStarTina chapter 7 . 6/18/2019
Yay! I like the first chapter rewritten version. Can't wait for the rest of the rewritten work. Looking forward to the written posts and more. Thank you so much.
Yomigaeru chapter 7 . 6/18/2019
I like the confidence Sakura in your story, the way you describe her make me in love with her again~ and the way Madara try to lie to himself is just so hilarious , it was a perfect presentation of " sour grapes" LOL but also I 'm sad that Madara and Yasuko seems did not went well, they stay too alienated to be family or lovers...and the reaction Madara heard about the pregnant must broke Yasuko's heart ((but I still don't know if the feeling between them can be call love... it's more like a liking ,but no matter what it is , it's hurt to find out the relation is breaking apart.)
But I have to say that seeing Sakura leave is the most heart-breaking part for me ;) it's seems that Her romance is always the bitter one.
xyra23 chapter 3 . 6/13/2019
I'm so glad I didn't read this chapter in the middle of the night. the end just gave me goosebumps, man that scared me.
tiny.sakura chapter 6 . 6/12/2019
I really want to know what’s going to happen!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/12/2019
Damn goodxxxx
leeny len chapter 6 . 6/12/2019
Thank goodness that you didn't abandoned this story, you can take your time as long as you update regularly or irregularly hahaha I'll still be reading it nonetheless (っ'-')͟͟͞͞
FreeDomsHope chapter 6 . 5/5/2018
I'm so glad I found this story. Its really hard finding MadaxSaku stories that I enjoy since its limited to begin with. I hope there's more ItaxSaku in the near future! Poor Tobi doesn't even know Sakura is going to be stolen right under his eyes TT
jazthaneleidelrosario chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
update
S chapter 6 . 11/13/2016
I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO WRITE THIS! I truly hope that you will decide to continue the story, even though its been over a year. I seriously love it btw.
Raiza-chan chapter 6 . 8/21/2016
Please don't stop, even if it's been a while this is such a great story!
anon chapter 6 . 7/15/2016
I can DEFINITELY see this as a movie. Like, I can imagine every single scene playing in my head like I've already watched it... it's just so captivating to see an UchiSaku fic set BOTH in the Warring States Era and in the present, at the same time having a touch of fantasy into it - it makes the story sound like a fairy tale with a dark twist.
I like how you depicted Itachi with a fascination to the doll bordering on obsession, how he feels somehow connected with her, and how he is somehow experiencing what Madara experienced after he was cursed. I'd like to think it was like a curse passed down to him. I really wonder if Itachi knows what he's doing, and if he's aware of the 'consequences' he has to face when he decided to open up the story. I don't know, maybe it's just me, or is Sasuke starting to obsess with the story? idk tho haha
I'd like to think he'll also start feeling an odd connection to the doll, and that Itachi will be too late to keep his brother from it.

I wonder: if ever Itachi gets to break the spell, would Sakura love him, or will she just use his feelings to get back to being human and (somehow, by some miracle of the gods) get back to Madara?

You know what would keep me from rambling/fantasizing/speculating? an UPDATE! Pretty please continue? I rarely come across something as unique as this fic. I know you have a life and all, but if you do have time and this happens to cross your mind, please come back. I'd like to see this tale unfold and, if possible, finished. Sorry for the long review/comment...
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