| Reviews for RvBY: Omega Penny |
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   XxDarkangelxX2003 chapter 16 . 8/1/2017 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Oh well gonna read a fic about nep-nep so yeah bye. Sincerely XxDarkangelxX P.S use the original way the infinity got to planet but different scenario for other fic. |
| Gem'N'Eye chapter 14 . 8/5/2016 im not getting anything above chapter 14. im sad now. stupid phone. |
| Fred voilles chapter 23 . 7/13/2016 Good fanfic compared to some of the others I've read and as a suggested joke, Tucker wants to use crescent rose since it's a sniper rifle and ruby tells him go to hell |
| noname chapter 3 . 7/9/2016 Honestly, the concept for this is great! The characters are mostly what they were in their original works and the plot is heating up. But, sadly, I am having trouble with all of the grammar and continuity errors as well as the over use of dialog. No offence, but I find it very important to have an equal balance of dialog and explanation. All the story needs is a third party to correct grammar, and trust me most professional authors have someone, as well as more showing of the story and less telling. All I am saying is that the story has a great concept, but needs some editing and revision. It is a great work and I know that you have spent a lot of time on it, but no one is perfect. P.S. I do love what you did with the characters! All of them feel like the orriginals! :P |
| CorenofLumbar chapter 9 . 7/9/2016 Bumblbee and WhiteRose. aren't even close to being canon. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/11/2016 Keep going your doing great |
| tankbuster626 chapter 22 . 2/1/2016 Sooo...would this count as Penny's first orgasam? |
| DWITD0421 chapter 21 . 1/16/2016 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god. Not only is this girl good at killing she is atleast quick about it. Are you planning a murder but instead just writing? JESUS this is pretty accurate with the way that all of this death, destruction, and plotting. But luckily im into that stuff so you done good. |
| DWITD0421 chapter 20 . 1/14/2016 Mother of God that was some of the most insane shit i have ever read. Why would you turn someone as cute and likeable as Penny into a murderous death machine? Granted I would have done the same but why anyone else? Also nice job with bringing in the Fox i always thought that guy was sool. |
| NinjaMoleRat chapter 20 . 1/11/2016 Cortana called Halsey mom? (squee) |
| Iron-ninja chapter 20 . 1/1/2016 Oh no it's to late |
| dragoncaller45 chapter 20 . 12/27/2015 why u do dis |
| dragoncaller45 chapter 19 . 12/27/2015 no...no...no, no, no, no, no no nononononononononononononononononononono |
| dragoncaller45 chapter 18 . 12/27/2015 d-does Doc 'like' O'Malley? |
| dragoncaller45 chapter 17 . 12/27/2015 oh fuuuuuuuuuuuuck no |
