Really wished you continued this story it had a lot of potential but I can see why you dropped it but that aside yea somethings get complicated along they away especially writing harems but I guess this was an ok. Way to end it

You stupid mother fucker. I truly hope you fucking suffer for being so retarded.

I have no interest in reading a shitty writers words about a whipped pussy that doesn’t defend himself from stupid bitches that don’t know their place. Die in a fire for being so fucking pathetic.

Me pareció muy divertido el capitulo

1) GRAMMER —
2) it’s wierd that they all love naruto but your making them like issei more than naruto

Hey man ..i just wanna say that i am enjoying your work dude...keep on writing u got a talent for that but anyway be safe

Terrible grammar and sentence structure you need a new beta

"don't forget issei?" FUCK ISSEI, AND HIS HAREM

Only retard can created this trashy story.

Please update soon

I thought ems dont bleed of blindness

Take back what I said last chapter about his power level but I don't understand why he uses his eyes big techniques most of the time instead of simply ending the fight and also how you would force Naruto to use a sacred gear against kokabiel is beyond me but I guess we'll see
I just hope you don't nerf him, his eyes are powerful but you can't possibly nerf his body and chakra so hard that he has to use things like susanoo against low level trash like riser

Honestly I can't see how you managed to nerf Naruto so much for what he's been given
He should at his base without using techniques be at the ultimate level...

Grammar needs some work lmao, but kinda interesting

Fix your English and get a beta reader. Kill yourself.