Reviews for Trying to Move on
Guest chapter 14 . 7/25
Wow half your story was a pointless waste of time. A 7 chapter flashback. What an idiot. Then on top of that, you are a sad sack of shit for being too pathetic to finish what you started.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25
I’ve mostly skipped the last several chapters because it’s still a fucking flashback that ultimately doesn’t matter at all to the present. The part that matters is Naruto coming back and the relationships. All this bullshit is a waste of time.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25
Naruto is telling his friends what happened to get his sword. How is Sakuras point of view relevant to Narutos story.
bruins35 chapter 14 . 7/9
I'm enjoying it so far, but since i saw this came out five years ago, and recently was updated in may. When should we expect the next chapter?
bruins35 chapter 1 . 7/8
Please fix your spelling errors.
FicReader of Desert chapter 1 . 6/26
I don't like it, i'll be honest. Im dropped it out when i saw what you just do with this Ino's bashing shit. Why even trying to show us Ino as a little bitch, which can only scream "SASUKE KUUN" ?
She would never act like that, especially in front of a guy who was on the verge of death. God damnit, nobody would act like that, even little bitches!
I will be critical and say what I see. If at the very beginning of the story you show the character is so disgusting and uncharacteristic, then I don't need to read the whole story to understand that this is bad fanfiction.
Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 14 . 5/22
It be interesting tif Naruto punched Sakura as payback
GunBlade2020 chapter 14 . 5/22
Hi there

I wonder what you do for the Jounin exam, maybe something unique in the exam?

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!
XWF1000 chapter 14 . 5/22
Thanks for now doing the current timeline story. I'd guess I'd didn't see your side note on the flashbacks due to maybe skipping these flashback stories because in my mind, not interested but granted seeing how Sakura regained Naruto's Protgege's respect back was a nice touch.
reikosanmi chapter 1 . 5/20
Love
Lalala chapter 2 . 5/18
Neji made it to jonin right away, but then again he has better leadership skills than Naruto (like not barging in and stuff). I guess most jonin are more clam and composed
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
shuira or however you spell it. instead of bashing someone’s hard work don’t read it you a hole. you just joined march 10th so how do you know how to write a story. next time you write a mean comment to a story think first and don’t read the story. Apparently if the story has over 300 favorites it must be a good story. sorry not sorry
XWF1000 chapter 13 . 5/18
It has been a while since you updated but I'd will say this, Any idea when this story will be back in the Present cause the flashbacks are OK in a sense but I'm ready to be back in the present like next chapter if possible. When will this happen? & also been following your story for a few years now but not sure how long you want this story to be. Hope you try to update more if you can since where in a middle of a crisis. Thanks
Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 13 . 5/17
It's sad Itachi had to die
Reedz22 chapter 13 . 5/17
been a while. I enjoyed this. a little short but good.
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