Omg this was amazing! I loved it !

Omg your witty banter this is so good

I like how you broke down the subplot of the film and had it girl the plot of your story. Way to continue the narrative! I love it so so much

Man your word choice and story crafting are a step above most fanfiction. I like your use of a dramatic villain who thinks out the stage using misdirection and drama by utilizing blanks. Good job!

Wonderfully written mystery!

Beautifully crafted and well written. Your world building and character building stick close to the vibe of the film. I am enjoying this so much!

Great writing! You have great voice and character development! I look forward to reading the rest!

Type your review 6y love this story, Shinseki is badass lol However Raizo want s to beat him. Who will win?
Omg that's so cool he's in love with Mika

The first two chapters were even better than expected, Mila didn't seem like she would care that much, however Raizo and his shenanigans didn't let her much time to prepare for a second encounter. I liked Maslow bossing his office around, in the movie he's betrayed Mom as trust. So it's good to see him treating his colleagues with more respect. Imma think Mika won't stay mad at him forever! Ninja assassin deserved more recognition to be honest LoL! And we need more Fan fiction too! You're probably gonna tired of seeing people wanting updates! This story is so good that you deserve to finish it one day. I am on a spree in here, will read all about our ninja :-)

I love your story. This is a perfect way to follow up the original story. I also loved the way that you developed Rizo and Mika while deepening their relationship. Awesome write.

I know this is years late and a dollar short, but this was really friggin good. Youve written a satisfying sequel to an amazing story and introduced new characters with their own believable back stories and wove them into an interesting plot which was all around well executed. Kudos to you as it were

I loved this chapter so much. Especially when Mika is asking about Kiriko. Well done!

great story

YES YES that was great

That was a Kick ass fight scenes