Reviews for Murphy's law
Venlin chapter 24 . 5/31
Well... I seriously didn't think that there would not be any more for this fic but this is a happy surprise. Glad to hear that you could find yourself. "I don't know what I should say, my grammar is not the best." I shall take a look at the other story you have made. I have taking some inspiration from your story about how the spartan would act around others in my own ideas. Once again, good to hear from you and I wish you good luck in the future!
Spacer Paste chapter 24 . 5/27
Welcome back!
lynda.key1 chapter 24 . 5/27
I was so happy to see this update! Sometimes we must go through trials to get where we need to be. I hope this all works out for you.

I went to FictionPress but I can't find you.
Venlin chapter 22 . 4/24
Also forgot to say, love the chemistry between Bradon and Alison.
Venlin chapter 23 . 4/24
Awesome fic one of the best Halo fic I have read so far. To bad that it seems to be on hiatus. I hope you can post more or at lest give a abridge story so we can know how it will end.
Jctherebel chapter 23 . 5/11/2019
Damn, I hope this story isn’t dead, I really enjoy it
cchazyboy chapter 23 . 4/1/2018
Going to be honest, I love this fic, and I'm sad to see it coming to an end. I just hope that it's a good fucking end. I have faith in you.
Mallahawk25 chapter 23 . 3/7/2018
I would recommend reviewing this chapter there is 4 or more errors in spelling
Guest chapter 23 . 1/20/2018
Another spectacular chapter. I eagerly look forward to the next.
Mallahawk25 chapter 1 . 1/8/2018
there is a typo with the Spartan numbers because you have allusion being referred to as 065 and 010
Firefox24x chapter 20 . 9/14/2017
Nice to see the next chapter, I hope you keep writing this story because it's a good one.
Kyle Chaulklin chapter 18 . 4/12/2017
Always god to have such a wonderful Romance Novel. Keep up the good work :)
TrafalgarLaw74 chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Spacer Paste chapter 17 . 1/27/2017
Great chapter!
Kyle Chaulklin chapter 16 . 1/23/2017
Loving the story so far, keep it up :D
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