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Okay, so honestly, this chapter is the last straw with me. I feel that, having set up the meeting with the two Chloes, your last minute decision to abandon that interaction perfectly encapsulates my recurring issues with this story. You repeatly come SOOO close to a good story, but invariably fall just short. From not using The Doctor proper, electing instead for an edgier, profane derivative, to glossing over Max's discovery of his true nature ( I know the phycic headbutt is canon, but still, it's lazy and best avoided ). I find myself constantly frustrated by decisions you make, which is annoying because your story is the closest to a good Life Is Strange / Doctor Who fic I can find.

Might have to try writing my own.

When I read the 'Bad Wolf' part, I got hella chilled up, wow

Professor takes shit from no one

Even though this fanfic was done roughly a year ago from my review this date, I just have to say, the fanfic and its story is amazing and well done since the start and up to the end. I had chills and thrills up at some moments and I would never expect some twists as well. I had a blast marathon reading and because of that, your works worth it.

Wow, now THIS was a crossover! Some parts of the Professor reminded me of the Seventh Doctor. The fact he has a Scottish accent, he is in his seventh incarnation, his name is the Professor, the same nickname Ace gave him. Am I right or am I right? I do like the Professor and his story. He's definitely no Doctor clone, but his own character. The Life is Strange characters are spot on, and I give you props for that as well! I also love how all the episodes aren't all that different, just some differences with the Professors involvement, but it all works (the episode with the most changes were episode five)! I would like to see more of this Professor some time in the future. Maybe make a sequel/prequel crossover with Before the Storm. Making an older Seventh Professor or future incarnation meet a younger Chloe perhaps? So, overall, it was quite the read!

I enjoyed this story very much. I honestly think it deserves a sequel.

This was an amzing story. I sitin down amd reading this to my hearts content. Thank you so much :D

Very nice ending.

Congratulations.

This was a nice way to end it, everyone (or most of them, Kate didn't make it :() lived.

So, those COTLs are basically Gallyfreyan nukes, can't imagine he'll have much use for those, though he'll definitely be taking them with him.

This was a good story overall.

i just finished through all your chapters
its really well done. though i've been given mix signals about your timelord.
you said 7th incarnation of the doctor (and i know from Doctor Who that this incarnation did prefer the Professor, though it was only Ace that called him that), and you did pretty well of capturing his personality, a lot of times if felt like you had just watched a newer incarnation and channeled more of their specific traits through him then 7's. but luckily it flowed well so it wasn't that noticeable.
only criticism i feel is worth mentioning, which really isn't bad at all, is through the chapters when the dialogue followed the Professor's point of view, you tended to repetitively say "the professor" at the beginning of sentences, one after another, to the point where it definitely stuck out that i was reading the line "the professor _" at an uncomfortable rate.
for the most part though i loved this story, this take on the events, and the fact someone used a Doctor from before 2005 (not that i hold any dislike for newer ones. its just uncommon).
Last note; while i know tat you mean for a final chapter, they way you ended this chapter, would make any fan instantly get what he's driving at, and that we knew everything was gonna be alright 3, you could actually leave it here if you wished

Holy crap. Can't wait to see the next chapter! It's possibly the last one! I wonder what's the professor is going to do.

I don't know why, but I want the lighthouse to turn out to be a TARDIS of sorts.

Galifreyan justice is sometimes even more obscure than disintegration.

The Doctor locked several people who committed crimes in the hopes to live forever in various prisons designed to keep them alive for all of eternity, but trapped forever. The Girl in the Mirror is one of those.

Hm, I think he knew what she was about to do, which is why he stopped her when he did. At least the photo is useless now. And that gets them out of the 'kill chloe' ending.

Though I am curious as to what you have planned now.