I love that Jess talks in quotes when he is drunk. I could actually see that happening.

Truly enjoyed this story. The quotes were a stroke of genius which really helped me connect with both Rory and Jess. You are a gifted writer

I really loved this story! I love seeing them figure out their stuff and end up together like they should've done. :)

Wow. Loved this story!

I think that Rory is just a little too emotional and depends just a bit too much on Jess but I absolutely LOVE all the quotes from the different authors and books.

I'm loving this fic. Sometimes Jess is OOC, a little too sappy, but I'm not really complaining. I love reading about their future with lots of fluff.

Love the fruit basket! I wish Rory had been more open to Jess and it's nice to see an alternate story where she also puts herself out there.

Thanks for renewing my love for literati. Immoraying for good things with them in the revival.

I really enjoyed reading this.

I came across this story in the middle of the night when I couldn't sleep and I loved the story from start to finish. I'm really looking forward to see what else you have and what you come up with next. It was Rory and it was Jess all wrapped up in one! Thank you for sharing this story.

Read this whole thing in one sitting. I loved it, even though Jess could be a little ooh for some, I like to belive that's who he really is once he grows up. Thanks for posting this. :)

This really was an amazing Rory and Jess story. Thank you so much for writing it!

Please write a story tracking their time in providence. Thanks!

The Richard - Jess "quote"-down was pretty awesome.

Babette was too much. You did a great job with her. The line about how lorelai was going to let Jess borrow it because she felt like she owed him something for the flowers was pretty good too.