Mako is gathering the straw-hat crew like limited edition collectibles

why does it have to be so goooood

I deeply need more mako/shanks content. They are the cutest. Hope you'll find the inspiration again !

THIS IS THE BET FANFIC I'VE EVER READ! I hope I am not pressuring you, but please make more!1 I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THAT I CHECK IT EVERYDAY FOR NEW CHAPTERS! MAKO U R SO CUTE U LITTLE SHIT!

wow red-haired pirates really do be adopting literally every child

When will u update?

I like this Story, I don't see much oc's that have fishman orgins like her. Plus it's very interesting seeing how she is basically derailing cannon, for good or bad who can say, though I do like her interactions with everyone. Even the this story hasn't been updated in a while, I hope to see more in the future, I would love to see they're interactions with luffy or whoever they manage to stumble upon in they're journey's.

I really like your story! The characters are adorable, especially Mako. The Mako-Shanks and Mako-Robin relationship is really great! The pace of the story is cool, we don't get bored.

Continue like this :) 3

This is one of my favorite stories, even though it's foundations are still being built. I like the detail you have about the kids mental states; recurrent rejection is not a healthy thing for kids to go through, SHAME on the doctors! At least they have each other, and the crew though. Shanks/Corazon are definitely good dads!

To be honest, the stowaway being Sanji surprised me; for some reason, my mind was convinced it was Killer, but this makes more sense. No Corazon, Law would never hate you. He'll probably be pissed about being lied to, but not hate.

This chapter is one of my favorites

You kinda like gave me a picture where law wanted to be a doctor for our protagonist and I kinda really really really ship Her and him and also sanjiiiiiiii Huhuhu but this chapter was for goodbye and I couldn't help but to cry because theyre not gonna see each other for a while and cotton is going to die and law and mako would get separated they can't make origamis together anymore!Huhuhuhuhu! Not for a while at least and I'm Kinda dying to know what happens in the future where nako meets luffy and other stuffs! Huhuhuhu

This I mention I love you so much? And how I love your stories? They're really amaziinnggggg and did I say I love you? No? Yeah I love you so muchhh! I have read every story you made!

Glorious... Can’t wait to see more!

i hope to see this update soon! it’s really well written.

And... I am the 190th review...

I'd like to say that your writing skills are awesome, the fact that you change cannon with little fear of messing stuff up is awesome! I wish I could be brave enough to change cannon in my Fanfics... But I'm working on it.
It's quite inspiring to see fanfic authors do so with little hesitation, which makes me more determined to do the same

Again, I love this story! Another favourite! I look forward to how it will progress(I'm also immensely curious as to how cannon will play out now...)

Also, screw those doctors, I approve of those two burning them down to ashes.

Fucking Pedophile, hope he can't walk for months to come without excruciating pain

Anyhow, love this story

I am loving this fic! I can't wait to see what comes next for Mako and friends!