OMG! This story is so amazing and I love the whole concept of another/parallel world similar to what they had in the first FMA anime. I just recently got into Fullmetal Alchemist so I'm a bit late to reading this and I know that you haven't updated in ages, but is there any possibility that you will? As well as a few of your other books? I've noticed that you have kind of been off the grid since 2016, which is kinda worrying since you don't know what happened? But I have got to say your Fullmetal Alchemist books are by far my favourite in the fandom and I really hope you continue them! 3

More! Please add more chapters when you can

I just want to say that I really love this story. I think the concept is fantastic and interesting and I really enjoyed reading it and I hope it continues because its been over a year since I first read this fic and I still think about it. I understand if you have other projects you'd rather work on but I just needed to let you know how much I enjoy this fic and hope it continues someday in the future.

AHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS STORY! IT IS SOOOOO GOOD AND THE PLOT IS SO UNIQUE!

I've read this before so I'm not sure if I've already commented this but the Homunculi have purple eyes.

This is a fun and wonderfully detailed au fic. Please consider continuing.

I love this story a lot. please continue. one thing I would Like to nitpick(sorry) is that list had the ultimate lance. I hate to nitpick that was just something that stood out to me. sorry. I live the story however and an patiently awaiting the next chapter.

I FORGOT ABOUT THIS FIC! I hope you plan to continue it! It's phenomenal! I can't wait until Ed is unlocked!

Woah. My first thought upon seeing this story was: Eh, must be one of those suckish AUs.
But then I read it for the hell of it.
Half an hour later, I stand happily corrected, and I really hope you continue this! I wonder if Jarred/Ed is going to ever get his memories back?

Oh man, you really got to update this. That's soo interesting that I'm hooked.

I love this story. I hope you update soon.

I love this. This is amazing. I'm on my phone so I can't do that long of a review. But this is fantastic. I absolutely love fanfics that deal with memory loss because I'm a machochist. I love Al's pain at feeling like he lost his brother because I think that's exactly how he WOULD react, and I love that Mustang/Mustard is there to help him through it all. And I love that Al saved Ed. And I love that they're teaching him about Amestris and alchemy and his past. And I can't wait to see how everyone is once Ef becomes unlocked. And I'm dying to see how Al responds when he sees Winry/Wendy (because based on Ed's description, she's unlocked, right?) so Al will at least have her back. Please, please, please update this. I love everything.

PLEASE UPDATE THISS THE BEST STORY EVER!

Lust called her power the 'Ultimate Spear' if I'm not mistaken.

this is nice so far. Names aren't confusing to me. I think you introduced the characters well enough before, plus most of the names are similar enough to draw connections. It'd be interesting to see if Ed can do alchemy.