can't wait for more chapters

I like it I really do

H

Lame

Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon

Y'know this fic isn't bad. It has some nice touches to it that I like. But honestly, I almost feel like it's more centered on ice fang than anything. Like come on. Naruto doesn't even need to talk (literally), or write. Jesus fucking christ.

I'm liking the story and hope that you update it soon

I hate sakura to I usally don't flame but if you did add here I would flame your ass off. I hate authors ruining good fanfics by adding her. all she was is a fangirl thoughout the entire Naruto series

maybe konan, hotaru, fuka, ni, female madara, naruko?

shizune, shizuka, kyubi, nibi, gobi, fu, kurosutchi. temari, ino, tenten, samui, mabui, koyuki, shion, mikoto, tayuya, fem haku, tsunami, kaguya (sage mother),jubi, amaterasu, fem itachi, sasuke, orochimaru, tsunade, kushina, kin, just some suggestions

This story had such potential until you made everyone out to be an enemy and after giving the wolf such a potty mouth ~
I feel like i am listening to an tayuya based fanfiction and i simply can't find any enjoy in this story so i gotta drop it.

Update soon please

Why Hinata? This story is so cliche. Everyone uses Hinata smh.

This was really good I hope you continue one thing I had trouble with was Naruto was kinda bipolar but in an alright way

just a random comment...when i read the line "No, Alpha is Alpha"...a sudden image of gokudera hayato pop into my head...hahahahaha :)...