| Reviews for Cotton Candy |
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korixkuma chapter 1 . 12/1/2017 I love this! Thanks for writing! :3 |
I'm Still So Deep chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 THIS WAS SOOOO CUTE! Great job! |
princess-j3ss chapter 1 . 3/4/2016 THEY KISSED! THEY KISSED! Okay, I didn't know how much I needed a carnival type setting until I read this. It was exactly the kind of cute fluff I needed (of course they would challenge each other these two Big Dumb Idiots ... they're so in love my heart can't handle it.) I'm just sitting here with this big stupid grin on my face from the cute hahah WONDERFUL ONE SHOT! |
incognlto chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 ! :) |
AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 SO FRICKING CUTE! AWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHH! Thank you so much for writing! It's so cute and great and sweet and everything I was looking for in a cute lil' oneshot! Thanks again! -kitty |
onlinestranger chapter 1 . 10/31/2015 Its funny that I was listening to a song by Bruno Mars just now XD Well anyways, this was great! Liked it. No. Loved it! :D |
Saki-Hime chapter 1 . 10/12/2015 That wad so cute, liked it a lot. |
InYourNightmares chapter 1 . 7/20/2015 This was so amazing! I loved it, you've written them so well! It was funny and adorable at the same time, really well done. |
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 This was an adorable story and I definitely had fun reading it. |
curligurl0896 chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 OMG this was so adorable... Only Ed and Winry would have an argument over who kisses better... |
ec-writes chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 Aww! Very cute! I think this whole idea was just absolutely adorable. Glad to see you writing again, and fluffy stuff at that! |
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 Yes oh yes! This was delectable and just right! Perfect amount of build up, humor, inexperience and hunger. I loved it! Also it made me hungry for cotton candy so I'm a bit upset too lol. Great job! ! |
KoiAndJelly chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 So damn sweet I got multiple cavities... And I'm not complaining ;u; That was the most adorable thing I've read all daaaaayyyyy! |
Alheli chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 THIS is the shit I do like oh my god I could not rad this with a straight face - ah young dorks falling in love. Amazing writing, the spanish was definitely a nice touch. |
BuggyNess chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 Oh joy! This was so innocent and sweet - like I truly think Ed and Winry's relationship played out. If Amestris in 1916-1917 was anything like our world at the same time period, there would have been a lot of "courting" like this. Though, Winry does have the patience of Jude to put up with Ed's cluelessness. Either that or she secretly finds it endearing. At any rate, I found it really in character for them to fight over who kisses better- and funny too. Love it! |