| Reviews for Jump the gun |
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TimeClockz chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 first... first firrst of all I will like to say that this is my song. halestorm- apocalyptic. this song is sexy af and I feel like no one even seem to know it |
automechKaz chapter 11 . 8/21/2019 loving the greys reference here lol |
screwyourjudgements chapter 18 . 4/10/2019 Am a huge fan of Bechloe, but I love this pairing as well! |
xLaShay chapter 18 . 10/26/2018 This was a truly wonderful story that I had to read in one go, only stopping for the loo and food. Since the PP movies are not continuing any time soon (I still have hope though), I'm reading any fanfiction I can in my spare time. While I love Bechloe very much, I'm finding them too ordinary a pairing so I'm seeking out the rare one like Steca and now Kommissar and Beca. I admit that I wasn't so sure if I even want to read about the latter because I'm from Germany myself and I wasn't looking forward to read my native language not well written but oh boy, you did a very good job. I honestly think that I missed out on an experience since I was able to understand everything without it needing to be translated.. Well, I'm rambling now. So, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story so much because it has the right amount of romance, humour and drama in it. Sometimes I wish you could have gone a lot more into details (What happend to Amy? How do Beca and Anja solve the long distance part or is Beca gonna stay in Germany or is Anja getting to the U.S., either way, I have enough of a good imagination skill, so I just continue your story in my head. I really love it, I love your writing and hope to read more of you. Thanks is for sharing this story with us! |
Genevieve chapter 18 . 1/11/2018 I've read this story about twenty times and I still adore it. I sort of wish there was a sequel.:) |
bechloeorbhloe chapter 18 . 12/6/2016 Just wow! You should come back to this pairing. You're very good at it. |
Alphawolf69 chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 I'm really excited to see a long [completed] fic written for this pairing! I love the fact you have German included, as DSM members would definitely speak amongst themselves using it (especially if they don't want Beca to know what they're saying). I also really appreciate that you didn't put translations embedded in-text, as I've read stories where this is done and it is extremely annoying and suspense-killing (we're reading the story from Beca's POV). Thanks for posting! |
Amazingly-Awful chapter 18 . 11/29/2016 This is the first fic I've read about Becommissar and this is why I started shipping them so hard so it holds an extra special place in my heart. Read this multiple times already, still makes me smile every time. Love your work! |
TornPaperYoyos chapter 18 . 11/19/2016 that was honestly a beautiful story. definitely one of my favorite becommissar stories, and one of the best and most well written ones. 10/10 i loved it |
ErzaVsErzaFan chapter 2 . 8/14/2016 So...this is pretty late but I wanted to congratulate you to the longest grammatically correct german part I've ever read in a BeKomissar fanfiction. Very nice and as a German I appreciate it |
Thelonewolf06 chapter 18 . 5/23/2016 I love it! it had the perfect amount of bella antics and beca and kommissar moments to make an awesome story. |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/30/2016 lol keep this going |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/11/2016 yo keep this going |
Yooooooooo chapter 18 . 4/2/2016 Great story Update |
DarkPoetess chapter 18 . 4/1/2016 Awesome! I loved it! |