Please don't tell me your giving Kurama a side pairing.

Great chapter. Although, please try to use more expressions and pun instead of repeating the "bat of a cave" line constantly.

Hm...well, being an author myself I also don't like flames/insults, but writing fanfiction does require you to have thick skin. Most people would flame just for the fun of it and hope their review would ruin your fun and love of writing. My advice? Any review is a good review, even the ones of people just cussing you out or saying you suck.

Anyways, I have two small problems with this chapter. First, the gramma is a little crooked so at times I have to restructer the sentences in my head while reading. Secondly, I noticed Naruto said Teacher-san. You do know that teacher is 'sensei' in Japanese, right? Along with doctor last time I checked.

Besides that, I like this story, and I'm definitely gonna read some more

Hey, so I'm pretty sure you can pass Naruto off as Part Charmian like Lala, nana, and momo, and their mom. Considering his nature and abilitys with people.

First of all, why would anyone assume Naruto has to have a guy friend?
When has Naruto ever been shown to hang out with guys unless he was dragged somewhere by them? Usually Naruto tries to hang out with Sakura, and even in 'The Last', Naruto was shown hanging out with the girls, not the guys, so where does this opinion Naruto needs a guy friend come from? Yes, he considered Sasuke a friend, which he really shouldn't have and which made the series extremely annoying, but when did you ever see the two of them 'hang out' or act like friends?

Secondly, what's the point of a female Ren and Run? I think it would be better just to leave it as is and have Naruto use some kind of jutsu to separate Run from Ren earlier in the story. As for a female human Peke...

WTF?! Where did that even come from?!

Oh and please god, do not add Saki to the harem! I can deal with Rin, but Saki is utterly annoying!

I don't really think an OC friend for Naruto is necessary in this story. Saruyama was only in To Love Ru for comic relief and really served no purpose, on top of that, he became baggage and was eventually reduced in appearances. Personally I thought Saruyama was only good in the English dub of season one, and after that he became more of an annoyance, especially when Rito himself was already enough comic relief. So adding an OC friend for Naruto is pointless, and no offense, I'm not a big fan of using 'American' named characters in a Japanese anime, especially males, since it's more common to find a FEMALE foreign exchange student in Japan than a male foreign exchange student. Plus the name 'Zack' is too childish and a 'Saved by the Bell' cliche.

Also I don't think Riko would be as clumsy as Rito. She was in the anime because she was in fact Rito in a female form, but really most of Rito's clumsiness was due to the actions of others, namely the girls vying for his attention. Yes, Rito was clumsy at the start of the story, but that was more along the lines of getting trampled or having things crash into him, he didn't start the 'perverted clumsy' acts until Lala came into the picture and that was mostly due to the girls bumping into him, falling on him, or sometimes even just exposing themselves and blaming him out of embarrassment. As such, I don't really see that happening with Riko since she's not going to be the object of Lala's affections and by extension her mishaps, at least, not as commonly as Rito was (I say this because look at Haruna. She's graceful and poised, yet she fell victim time to time to one of Lala's inventions). Plus to be blunt, Rito's antics in To Love Ru are actually pretty annoying, he's worse than Issei Hyoudou.

Another thing is I hate 'Anti-Pervert' Naruto. Yes, while Naruto does show disdain towards some perversions, like Jiraiya's peeping and Kakashi's addiction to porn (even though he DID give Kakashi an Icha-Icha book at the beginning of Shippuden), Naruto himself is prone to perversion. Not only did he create the Orioke no Jutsu, but he's had perverted fantasies about the girls in the series, especially Sakura, proving Naruto IS a pervert inside.

Lastly I think Naruto should forgive Kushina and I think it would be interesting to make it that Kushina's abuse was due to being hypnotized by a Sharingan. One, the Sharingan would be the only reason to explain why Kushina would go from abusing him so cruelly to trying desperately to make it up to him. While someone may do this out of guilt for neglect or mild abuse, someone whose an alcoholic and extremely abusive as you've depicted Kushina, would not have such a quick change of heart, at least not until something truly tragic happens. The Sharingan is also a believable scapegoat because contrary to fanfics, Canon has shown many instances of people being hypnotized by the Sharingan and never remembering it, as opposed to stories where characters like 'Yagura' suddenly remember seeing a Sharingan before being controlled, in canon, most controlled never even realized they were, so the Sharingan makes a believable excuse for Kushina abusing Naruto, and then regretting it. Two, Naruto IS going to at some point want his mother in his life, especially living with the Yuuki's whom rarely see their own parents, and despite his abuse at Kushina's hands, it's not realistically possible to keep hating her, trust me, this is something I'm saying from experience. I'm personally someone whom will backhand someone just for getting on my nerves, yet I put up with YEARS of my family putting me down, lying about me, and spreading rumors about me before I FINALLY had enough. I always would try to justify "this is my family and I only have one" before I finally decided it wasn't worth it, and like I said, I've got a more volatile personality like Gibbs off NCIS, smacking my best-friend in the back of his head for saying something stupid or even being outright hostile towards those who just annoy me, and if it took my family years to piss someone as short-tempered as me off, I'm sure it would take someone like Naruto longer to reach his breaking point with Kushina.

can you please continue this one the rewrite is completely different the only similarity is that they both have him leaving the village

There is some good LOGIC used in a FANFICTION! It doesn't make sense for Gaara to leave Kankuro or Temari to fend for themselves. Especially not when at this point in time he should be getting considered for the role of Kazekage also...

Correction, Logic and Reasoning don't exist in bad fics. When Authors try to use Logic and Reasoning for why things happen or why characters act the way they do it is automatically better than 99% of the crap on this site.

This is a mediocre fic. It's written decently but that's about all it has. Naruto is a typical White Knight Perfect Boyfriend character who doesn't make mistakes. He is also gonna have a very over inflated Harem because the Harem for one series wasn't enough. You had to overinflate and make it more difficult for yourself because more girls equals better fic right? Nah.

Idiotic reason for discovering the Kyuubis Gender.

Don't delete this one please, even if you don't continue itu and already make a rewrite just don't delete it, i still haven't read this one..

I cant be bothered to give a story a shot when it opens with kushina surviving and treating naruto like shit.

Especially over a retarded reason like blaming him for the 4ths death. That makes no kind of sense with obito or the kyuubi to blame to blame the not even 1 hour old newborn. Her newborn at that.

But I like this story

It would be better if you add that, he had somehow feeling de ja vu

Waitt.. 13yo already high school? Isn't it should be middle school. First year of high school in Japan usually at 15/16yo.