this story is destroyed by chapter 45. seriously hermione looks like a slut.

claims he loves draco and farts the same with a ugly ugly man. I don't deserve a draco. not this bitch I'm going to a brothel.

in this short story redhead was a moron and disgusting. her description of this interrupted is hypocrisy. I'm going on that fuckin 'whore

I want it or be dracos baby because that would be interesting when Ron figures out that Hermione is carrying dracos baby!

I don't even know why I let myself read this crap this long. Hopefully, your writing has improved over the years. I'm outta here.

what the hell is this shit

what the fuck is this

this is so muggle-ish

HAHAhaHAHAHAHAHaHAHAHAHAHAHAHaHAHAHAHAHAHaHAHAHAHAHAHahAHAHAHAHA I laugh at the South Park part!

Please look up what tourette's is. Don't write hateful misguided jokes. I wish I could share a link with you and educate you. Clearly you aren't educating yourself.

Damn for Dramione! Will this truly change things for them?

Nicely done

Oh my...poor Draco and his discovery.

Draco curses the girl he wants repeats with? Whoa.

I wasn't expecting Draco to hang out in Hermione's room as he waits for Lisette. It was interesting.

Oh what if th baby is a girl... I really hope it is :)

It was written kind of spaz-like, but I still enjoyed it. :D Good job, and thank you for sharing.

i loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!

Great story! You inspired me to start writing again. Thank you for sharing your story ]