An interesting variation on the Harry Potter world.

You have so much talent! This is an incredible story and I cannot wit to read the rest of it!

Why is half of your punctuation wrong? Either you’re an idiot or sloppy.

I would like to add that you are a good writer and I hope your next story is better. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

The last few chapters really left me disappointed. It felt like the story was building to a point for the characters to change into something beautiful only for you to hit a bad note and send them all spiraling back to the beginning. I’m rather upset with this, gonna have to go find another story with a better ending to get rid of this terrible feeling. Thanks

I LOVE THIS STORY! you did an amazing job! thanks so much for writing this masterpiece.

Most of your punctuation is incorrect.

NO NO NO! Draco was supposed to become a vampire and not be all bloody depressed and turned into a blood bag! Now he'll still die one day! At least he should have gotten his magic back really a squib now! NOOOOO.

loved every letter

Will that plan even work?

How long does he have then?

I'm kind of glad Harry killed Greyback. He would only undo everything good. Not that I'm surprised he'd want Draco dead.

Yes, being around them might not be such a bad idea.

Will Hermione and Dana make another appearance? It seems to me that even if you are unsure about the magical creature part as human you should still respect them as you should animals at the very least.

I don't get why they'd ever allow Greyback into the school for this reason.