| Reviews for Unraveled |
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   KillgarraghForever chapter 17 . 7/7 Ah. So Jeff's not as much of an asshole as we thought. |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 14 . 7/7 Jeff Tracy you utter dirtbag! |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 12 . 7/7 They're all assholes except John, Scott, Virgil, Gordon, Anthony and Grandma Tracy! All of them! Especially Jeff! |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 7 . 7/7 Yes, you are being very mean to poor John. Stop. |
| KillgarraghForever chapter 1 . 7/7 What? |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/9 Bloopers: Scott: Has anyone seen my second sock?! We’re about to start! Gordon:*has flashback* *throws sock into the sea* Sorry I don’t know where it is, heheh Alan*Smurks* Virgil: WHO ATE MY COOKIES?! John: What did I do to have gotten these brothers? Jeff: Your late... Tracy brothers: WE DONT CARE! Jeff:*Cries in the corner* Scott:*figures out what Gordon did* GORDON YOU ARE SO DEAD MEAT AFTER THIS! John: heheheh nothing to see here people, Gordon: *Runs away* HELLLLLLLLP MEH PLZ Alan:He is dead isn’t he? Virgil: Yep... Tracy Fam: Action! Wait what r the lines?! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/15 More Bloopers: John: Reeeeeeeeeeeeee Scott and Virgil:Wut the heck? John:I’m a ninja on a roof Gordon*throughs box* John:*drops* uh can we start over? Film crew:*collapses in laughter* |
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/15 BLOOPERS: Jeff:I didn’t want that ding! Wait ding? John:*collapses in laughter* Scott:Dad! Cut! Virgil:Nope I’m out! Gordon:Wut? Alan:You didn’t want me or Gordon? Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/12 1 review1 like for John |
| spockllap chapter 26 . 5/12/2017 you should make a sequel |
| Spock chapter 26 . 3/4/2017 please make a sequel |
| PuffandProud chapter 26 . 2/3/2017 Great story, love your writing, really love the John and Antonio relationship :) |
| Bedlamx28 chapter 26 . 12/17/2016 This was a truly beautiful story. I loved all of it (for which I feel guilty). With the double crossers double crossing, and the extravagant plot twists, This was a story which kept me up till 2:30am reading. So, if the hood is Johns biological father, then he and tintin/kayo are cousins, kyrano his uncle, and the rest if the boys tintins half cousins? Crazy family right! |
| holly chapter 26 . 12/11/2016 nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo |
| Madilayn chapter 26 . 12/11/2016 Absolutely not fair to end like that. Not fair to make me cry at work. NOT FAIR TO KILL JOHN. I enjoyed the fic, but I can say right now, if I had known a major character would die, I would not have even read it because I hate those sorts of fics. Which is why I am saying I like it but I hate it. I love your writing, how you tell a story, but I hate what you did. |
