| Reviews for The Storm Within |
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Dovahkiin795 chapter 14 . 5/2 Well this story is dead |
darkyeschucho chapter 14 . 4/1 OK, man, it has been almost 2 years since the last update and the chances you see this now are slim, but I must tell you one thing. I hope everything is going well for you, I hope you have a great time in whatever is you're doing right now As in for the story: I came here for a nice love story of my favorite ship, but I am surprised to see that it is more than that. As stated before, it has been a while and you probably already moved on from this, or want nothing to do with this anymore, but I must say that I appreciate it. As an artist myself I know how scary it can be to publish something you've done, but I want to let you know that your effort to do it is appreciated, by me, wich might not mean anything at all to you, but I still wanted to let you know. I am certainly less experienced in life than you are, and nobody loves me, so I can't really give you any tips on that. Just, I don't know man, I wish you a good life, I really do. |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/16 I think so far the story is really good |
NebularArrow chapter 14 . 1/29 Hello! Where is the New chapter? |
Sarge Abernathy chapter 14 . 6/20/2019 This was an amazing story, and well planned out. Very good in characterization. I see its been a while, so life has probably moved in a new direction ... but for the chapters you've given it was a great story. Thank you for it! |
TheFandomAffect69 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 I just wanted to let you know that your story has been stolen on Wattpad by a user named 42Apples. I didn’t even realize it until I was told by one of my dearest Wattpad friends that the supposed “sequel” was also stolen. Amazing story though, by far my favorite fanfic of all time. |
Brisingrwb chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 This is a honestly really great story, please please please update it soon! I really enjoyed reading the fan fiction but I was sad to realize the last chapter was a life update that was posted almost a year ago. Please don't forget about this story because it's so awesome! Please tell me if you'll continue writing this. |
Habiyeru chapter 14 . 2/17/2019 Hi, I absolutely love your story. It’s one of the most realistic, well paced, and best fanfics I’ve ever read. I stayed up all night reading it, and I’m excited to see where it goes and how other characters might react to the relationship! I’m also interested in finding out what happened to the other guy on Fichina (was it Leon? Panther?). Anyways, I hope to see where this story goes and I hope you have a bright future! |
My name is Nikolay chapter 14 . 2/5/2019 Dude, I really like your story and please, please do not stop. I'm sorry for your sister, I also lost mine and I know how it is ... so I leave my condolences. |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/1/2018 I’m really sorry for your loss.I hope things are getting better for you. I have to say,I absolutely adore this is the best piece of writing I’ve read in a LONG time and I can’t wait for you to continue it.I come back and re-read it whenever I can.I’m simply impressed with your writing skills and how you use them to portray Fox and Wolfs relationship. Please,don’t feel the need to rush. Take your all understand you have a life. Best wishes :) |
Fog-22 chapter 14 . 9/29/2018 Wow, this is extraordinary. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss! I can't even imagine how I'd feel. Congratulations on all of your accomplishments! I hope that you continue to find success in your endeavors! I'm pretty new to the Star Fox fandom myself, but this fic has been a big inspiration for me. I hope you continue writing it. Best wishes! |
averagedayy chapter 14 . 9/16/2018 I just finished reading and oh my god! I love this! I'm sorry to hear about your struggles. I'm glad youre doing better and I hope you continue to do well! (aslo! after reading, I listened to Promises by Calvin HarrisSam Smith and it fits too well, especially with the later chapters) |
DeathSeraph chapter 14 . 8/20/2018 Hoping to see you again soon |
Reddogdingo chapter 14 . 7/3/2018 Just re-read the lot anticipating the next chapter. Oh. But anyway some observations; the writing begins well and gets better. I note that you score kudos from other writers with first-rate stories to their credit. To me I can sort of hear the characters talking in the dialogue sections. And as the real Wolf comes out from the tough-guy mask their problem has changed from how to get rid of him to how to keep him! Just go on where the story is leading you and if the posting site has to change so be it. |
Placeboeffect98 chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 Happy to see you're back! I really love this story and can't wait to read morekeep up the great work! |