Loved it, very intense

I love this!

Aw I loved it. Eric is relationship material for Tris. Well at least he's willung to try.

I swear this story gave me butterflies. Tris being slightly hurt made me hurt inside for her when she found herself alone that night she spent with Eric. And he comes back… I had them feels. Gosh, I loved this. I hope you write more of them together. ;) xx

NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Love it! Is it bad I hope there is more to follow?

I have to tell myself to comment because I am so eager to get to the next story. LOL. But damn. That was hot.

I absolutely LOVED this FYI I too watch TVDhave 2 stories on here for BonnieKai haha idk if you know them or have kept up with TVDTO ت but shit! Eris or Tric lol whichever they go by kinda has that same 'Impossible Loves' non-canon vibe as Bonkai hahah I liked Elejah tooo heheBLAME PLEC (I call her JuciferD Anyway! I told another amazing Eris writer, Miss dardarbinx that I've found a few that were really awesomeyour fics are extremely well writtenjust fuckin' perfect babes! I am in the middle of updating my ficswriting new ones so I try to avoid Bonkai fics lol (messes with my story vibes, I'm odd, I know haha) I haven't read the books neither (divergent trilogy, SORRY GUYS! *am on the 5th Game of Thrones book/and reading Anna KareninaLOL soo I've adored Jai Courtney since Spartacusdecided to see if there was any Eris fics cus HONESTLY? I just was not into FourTrisI feel like the sexual tension was insanely thick between JaiShailene...hell! the chemistry sizzled on screen with the shared gazes or EVEN GLARES LMAO So now I am adding a new fic/fandom to write about and hopefully I do it justice! ت But I reallllly just wanted to say to you, thank goodnesssss you are somewhat, quite possibly around my age? haha I'm 26sometimes I feel like I'm too old to fangirl LOL but...fuck it;p Secondly, insanely AMAZING writer. Proper brilliant, babes. Seriously. I am quite particular only because I'm kind of a busy body, it has to capture my attention. Being a brill writer? Yep, it does thatP.S. I tend to write baby essays...lol sorry ت

Really liked the premise of your one-shot... Is there any chance you would make this into a proper story? Would really like to know how it started and how it ends with them x

I just came back to reread this story and wanted to leave a review. :) I really like this-the development, the characterization.
It works really well. (I've probably come back to read this a few times now) What can I say? I love your writing. I love the tug and pull-the way you can put a slow-burn in a one-shot and have it feel complete; ya know? It's well-done. Love Love Love.
Whenever I'm in the middle of writing and I get stuck or too in the moment when i cna't write, I read some Eris and I find myself going to yours. :)

loved it. great work

Love this! So awesome! :)

I love these little Eric/Tris one-shots. I hope you do a full length story of them soon. I think it will be great.

Steamy hot! Any chance on a sequel?!

I LOVED THIS! This was holy shit intense!