I love this story! Would you let me rewrite it and post it; I hate not seeing such a good story be finished.

I don't know when this was published, but this is fricken amazing, and I need another update.

Roses are Red
Some Orchids are blue
PLEASE UPDATE
or I will be VERY mad at you

This is really good. Please continue.

Please update!

The Maximoff Twins Headcanons
Truth be told. the twins always had a tough relationship stemming from their rivalry for their two father's affection and the polar opposite beliefs which drove the others insane. Pietro is a materialistic smug spoiled brat and Wanda is the gentle, benevolent, proper lady. They are literally two sides of the same coin.
Their different views of Anna Karenina explains everything : Pietro idolizes Count Vronsky and emulated his style and elegance, while Wanda detested the turbulent romance between Anna and Vronsky and preferred the mundane love story between Levin and Kitty. Pietro laughed at his sister for liking that ' old guy ', yet Wanda warned him of the consequences if he actually took Vronsky's path
Their love stories are polar opposites : Vision and Wanda re painfully shy around each other bvefore Vision is pushed by Staerk to go out on a nice dinner date with Wanda. Wanda is very green to the dating department and most of her crushs are either sent away or recommended by her family, so she is very naïve in choosing future husbands
Within one glance of Crystalia, Pietro is literally willing to throw away everything in his life: he showers her with the mostn expensive gifts, insulted her family and oftentimes hurt his own friends just for the sake of her. The calm and benevolent Crystalia is uncertain of their romance since she knew that it will ruin their careers if discovered. It did became an open secret among her allies, yet she was smart enough to keep it down from the public than spread it out like Anna Karenina. Truth be told, she also wanted her and Pietro to be happy, so she helped Pietro to be more moderate and used only her intelligence and compassion to make peace within rivals to save the day. Without her, Pietro's maturity is never explored.
Pietro is the extroverted casanovna with anm exquisite taste of wine and everything fanciful, and Wanda is the geek who preferred to curl up in her bed reading a book than going to some stupid party. Vision is the socially awkward guy who knew nothing about humanity, and Crystalia is the charismatic and seductive socialite/ psychologist whose wit, beauty and allure made her the toast of high society, and object of Pietro's obsession

Great chapter. I hope you update soon :)

I love the twins even more than Loki.
Okay,peoplw kept saying how pitiful he was, but I dont find him any bit pitiful, not even with his sordid affair witht eh flighty and careless Sigyn. But those kids are really deep
At first, they are presented as monstrous looking teenagers with a huge revenge on Stark and his team. Qe all know that Inhumans hated humans, and they are no expection. When you go further, the reason why they hate humans so much is that their snobbish aristocratic parents and the entire of their clan sre wiped out by Stark missles. In additon to their cruel fathrr, HYDRA also twisted him who he is. Pietro even volunteered to become in HYDRA to achieve the dream his father wanted him to have, but that is not what fate had planned. They did set aside their grudge to ally with thr Avengers to fend off Ultron who was the rral vilian, showing that tje cruel Inhumans havr sense of empathy
In Infinity War, the Maximoff twins are like any other troubled polar opposite sibling duo: Pietro is materialistic, impulsive, conniving and vengeful, focusing more on the loss of status than thr loss of his family. Wanda is warm, gentle, kind and loving, and seeks love rather than materialistic pleasures. During Civil War, Wandas heart was broken by forced circumstances- Vision never betrayed her, Hawkeye did. And when Pietro found out about the Civil War, the wrath was do deafly to the point he coerced his new friend Peter Parker to gather up samplrs of Tonys BLOOF to make himself more powerful
This is getting angsty. But it does not stop there. During the dpace gang tension with Thor, Pietro and the Inhuman Royals, Pietro is horrendously in love with Princess Crystalia- the sweet, gentle, nurturing and loving sidter of the materialistic Medusa. Crystaia is unlike anything he ever seen: she socializes with humans and Aesirs with extreme ease, her existence revolves around love and not hate, she lives for her dreams and not revenge and power, she is gentle, sweet, emotionally stable and unconditionallly optimistic she is basically so beautiful and so alive,it drove Pietro wild. Pietrk will do absolutey anything for her even insulting Medusa by calling her all sorts of horrible things. Through Crystalia his immaturity was explored, as he was dubbed a hypcorite by Steve as he tried in vain to dtop Vision touching Wanda again. Eventually, Pietro eventually learned that love is the most important thing, and forgave his father.
Stan Lee did a sublime job to portray them as children who went on the wrong track than just villians turned good guys in the comics.

Continue please it's such a great story.
I love the parts when Pietro and Wanda are together even of Wanda is asleep

nice 1st chapter

The Maximoff twins are pure blood Inhumans
That is true. Because according to MCU database,they all have Tim Burton stylef looks, mad in every sense, and communicate through their energy. In fact, despite the vast range of powers, all Inhumans have Extreme Physiology, Telepathy, Energt Communication and Supersonic Scream ( See Wanda )
Attilan is a magical land based heavily on Journey to the West, with talking flowers, snowy mountains, movijg stairs, tech buildings, every weird thing you can think off

NOOOOOOOO PLEASE CONTINUE!

Aww man! I can't wait until the next update!

Love it
Keep writing
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Thank you so much for updating. I was starting to worry...
Something I love about my older twin brother is when we were in school, and he would protect me from the bullies. I think people would enjoy that sort of thing in your stories.
But overall I just love this story and these characters, keep writing.