Hell it's MORE than okay! LOL, great story. Loved it!

Wow, now this was steamy.

Still a guilty pleasure and still wishing for an after math chapter or two

Fucking Hot, and never let anybody tell you other wise I absolutely loved the detail and the Vocab was beyond perfect and it was dirty is the best of ways, you are an amazing artist and would love to read a continuation of this.

Maybe have a time skip like a week or two and Kagome try and convince Inuyasha that what they did was not a horrible thing and maybe start moving forward with a meaningful relationship?

And definitely have a lot of sexy time with Inuyasha being his real self, not that Youkia Inuyasha isn't awesome in the Hotness department and all but the regular Inuyasha deserves to come out and play to, don't ya think?

Wow this is way more explicit than what I'm used to but I really liked it. And the end was so sweet, too. Well done!

This was pretty good. A little on the explicit side for me, but I like your vocabulary and the atmosphere you created

Wow! Soo good! Great story!

Hot! Graphic in a good way. The demon Inuyasha sexy fic I needed. I like that he didn't hurt her in any form. It was a bit wordy in terms of vocabulary. Still, very well done! The ending when he came back to himself was gorgeous and just made everything too.

I really like this story. It's well written and hot. Will you write a sequel, going into Inuyasha's reaction, and maybe a continuation of their activities?

I love this story. The words and ideas flow so easily. Your descriptions are absolutely crisp and beautiful. Emotions are conveyed well. This is one of the best smut fics I have EVER read. You are so talented.

On a related note: I wonder what happens after this. As in how Inuyasha reacts, do they end up talking about it, do they end up together, can she heal him, how does he feel about what happened, how does she feel, etc. it would be cool to see a follow up someday if that was of interest to you.

Omg. I don't know what to say. Wow. Bravo to you, that was way more effective than other stories I've read. I mean daaamn. Someone give this writer an award for awesomeness. Is my face red? I think it is. *checks mirror* yup it is. I need to cool off

The really needs a aftermath chapter added to it! Loved it so very much

This. Was. So. Good. Like omfg. GOOD. I need a cold shower. And then I need a sequel. You have all my internet applause. Like hot damn, kidswithguns91, you are a fucking artist.

two words... guilty pleasure.

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