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Issei's Familiar should end up being a dragon type pokemon just for laughs

Is Isseu gonna summon Servants

As a guy who read a lot of Gamer fanfics, from really good ones to decent to bad to downright horrible let me give you a bit of advice. NEVER under any circumstances make a passive skill that increases the stats. Either do it with active skills or have the passive ones increase the traits instead of the stats themselves.

Example of Active skill:
Berserker's Rage LV 1 Active: 5% increase to STR, VIT, and DEX but 80% decrease to INT and WIS

Example of Passive skill:
Weightlifting LV 1 Passive: 3% increase to base strength.

Notice how I didn't say STR but just base strength. This prevents you from increasing the base stats from the skill then forget it and have stat points added on top of the increased stats.

You could have skills add stats though.
Example:
Athletics LV 1 Passive: Makes your body fitter and sports get easier. Adds 1 to each STR, VIT, and DEX every five levels.

This is awful. There is not enough time in a day to tell you all that's wrong with it. Suggestion: delete the whole thing. Check in to rehab. After about two years check out if you are off the meth/crack/heroin/fen. Start to write again. Good luck and have a nice day my friend.

AND you've fucked even more now... i was giving it another chance seeing as the chapters were getting a bit to childish but then with this shit...

Dropped.

Stop writing and go kill yourself!

SOOO STUPID why'd you bring such a stupid ASS story ark here? Really ridiculous and hope you don't do something like this again. It only shows that your mind can only think as such and can only use cliche of 13 year olds in your story.

typical kidnap girl and fight to get here back...*sigh* maybe you should go to school and LEARN before attempting to write again!.

OMG! Phoenix tears worth 300 yen? Phenex clan sold 1 bottle worth a fortune, they got serious broken competition there for sure XD

You do realize that everybody who isn't either one, a teenager, or two isn't cannon fodder, will completely distroy issei. The power disparity is huge. The Main Players of dxd can casually turn Japan into a lifeless wasteland. If issei is still having trouble beating the cops, who are completely natural, then there is still a long, very very long, way to go before you can even consider that you have written yourself into a corner.

is Pyrrha next

holy fuck it's jaune arc

r u continuing this one or not?

Dude this fic is good as it is and well you don't see someone going for this type of thing frequently and well this was really funny so don't let some bad reviews get you down

dude I really enjoyed it as is. I also recently had to rewrite my fic at 14 chapters. I understand the difficulty but the power level and ability of Issei is decent pre Canon. Don't get yourself down over that kinda stuffthe best cure is to make enemies more badass and leave the main beaten not dead.

gamer fics are unimaginative as fuck. they are bland pieces of shit 99 percent of the time. but when done right can actually add plot and character development. this piece of garbage is not one of them. it is yet another wish fulfillment fic from a horny dog in his mom's basement