Usually I dont have problems with the english language. But right now I am at a loss of words to express how great your work is.

The story develpoment is logical and character driven.
The psychological parts seem absolute realistic.
The character writing is on point.
The tone of the story is exactly the same from the original work.

Your work is great, fabulous and I am so grateful to be able to read it.
You are a genius. Thanks for writing it.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH

I can honestly say that I didn't want this story to end. I think I'll read it all over again.

Very good story. I love it.

this is an piece of art!

I am sitting here crying because of your beautiful story. This was amazing, the whole way through. You captured the characters perfectly. They really felt like the Asami and Aki from the manga but more open, like you really got inside their heads. Their motivations were believable and real and true to who they are. Asami's compromise at the end is, in my opinion, a perfect resolution for this relationship. Thank you! Please write more!

Just re-read this. So powerful and touching.

Your story was beautifully written. I loved it so much. Perhaps your ending foreshadows what will happen in the manga. Thank you for a magnficent masterpiece.

All is well at the end! Great story so far!

Actually, I am just a bit surprised, I have published a fanfiction with very similar ideas... I swear I didn't read yours at all before starting my own. I just discovered it right now. I just want to make sure I didn't paste anything from you. '

Bye!

I love sadistic authors, don't worry about it!

This is by far the most intelligent, most thrilling, most intense, most brave Finder Series story I've ever read. You are a tremendous writer.

Wow. First chapter so incredible and exciting and thrilling. Will read more.

I loved when you compared Akihito and his father. "an undeniable little force, much like his son". was a faviorte part.

know that you mentioned that the story nearly went down a really werid direction it's making me want to know, ahgahh.

wow Akihito overdosing was not something i was expecting.

i was reading the oral sex part, and my brain is screaming that STD's can still be transfered that way from my many hours of class in health class, and parent and child class. Then i read the last part, and im like okay this author knows what they are talking about good. Love the story and can't wait to read more, i was a little warry about reading it at first since the topic didn't really intrest me that much but the little voice in my head kept telling me i should read it, and im happy i did.

DJ OUT