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Hello again.. I Googled about orgasmic birth and it seems that you didn't make it up ! I just wished I had the same kind of experience, but I think that you must be in a relaxed environment, with your husband/boyfriend hugging you, maybe in water. In my time there was nothing of that, I had episiotomy in both times, husbands weren't allowed in and I was in a cold environment with doctors and nurses I didn't know (except my obstetrician) in a hospital.. Both were extremely painful and I never heard or saw anything similar to orgasmic birth in other women I witnessed.. Oh and one more thing about my previous comment : I think that Dr Benoit needed to have at least one nurse to assist her with Ziva during the birth. I dunno if you had personal experience with childbirth, but I know from my experiences that one person cannot handle everything during that moment.. Having a family member to assist isn't enough.. Take care, both of you..

Hello there.. I found your story 3 days ago and after some intense reading, caught up with you.. I'm sorry that your sister-in-law is having health problems, I gather that it's because of them that you haven't updated since months.. It's very kind of you to help her posting her stories.. It would indeed be a shame for a good fiction to get lost.. I'm also sorry that some Tiva or McAbby fanatics are giving you a hard time.. Well, you know the saying : it's impossible to please everyone.. Personally I love McGiva fanfics.. I'm a huge McGee fan and after the way Abby treated him for years, I find hard to believe that she'll be a good wife/life partner for him.. Of course, I've read many McAbby fics too, but they have a much nicer Abby than that of the show.. Just a few inconstancies : first, being a nurse, I know that a doctor can't be an obstetrician and neurosurgeon at the same time.. And after 3 months of coma, a person us unable to walk around in a few days, he/she needs weeks of therapy because of the atrophied muscles in order to be able to move.. The last thing I can think is that I had two childbirths myself, had many friends and relatives who gave birth to kids, assisted to many childbirths but it's the first time I hear about orgasmic labor.. I wonder if you didn't make it up for the purpose of the story.. Of course, since fanfics are about imagination, even pigs can fly in them :)) ! But I believe that even in fics when it comes to medical conditions, the events mustn't be so far away from the real deal.. But it's my opinion of course.. Anyway, don't let anyone keep you from writing and finishing this story.. Take care..

Oh I wish I had that kind of compassionate attention while my pregnancies.. Not only my husband wasn't aware of a pregnant woman's needs, but he also didn't care much about my uncomforted situation, including the nausea, the vomiting, the constant fatigue, the need to go to the bathroom all the time, etc..

Hello there.. Don't let those Tiva fans, upset you, I loved your story.. In fact, I have read many McGiva fanfics and I think that Ziva is a much more mature life partner for McGee.. I'm a huge McGee fan and I always hated the way Abby and Tony treated him for years in the show. So I'm not a particularly McAbby or Tiva fan.. Keep on, my friends..

please update soon your killing me here. You write really good story's. I have all almost all of the story's you right saved on my laptop so I can read them over again. Keep it up. I think there should be more story's about McGee.

I love this story snd all your others too. Just and amacing writer. Cant wait for an update

I found the story a few days ago and read like a mad woman to get caught up. My heart breaks for McGee. I hope he gets his memory back. Amazing job! Love it and cannot wait for more!

amazing as always
love the fanfic
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Such a sweet picture. Tim cuddling his baby..swaying to the music..what a great daddy!

I like how Tim was being careful in the whole getting Amal back to sleep plan. Ziva is cursing Jeanne for saying what she needed in front of Tim right now. Nice chapter.

So sweet Tim getting Amal to go back to sleep.

Amal is going to be like Ziva knowing many languages. Hope Tim can keep up with his wife and son in the language game. The long nights with Amal will hopefully help Tim not focus on his memory problem. Nice chapter, sorry you have the lingering negative reviewer following every story.

Two days old and little Amal is already going to experience all sorts of languages.

I hope Tim starts to accept the baby as his...he was doing so well before the labor, now he seems u sure...I love this story..don't let a couple of idiots ruin it..if they wanted a tiva story then they should go read something else! Can't wait to read more!