Once again you've made a great fanfic. And I loved this ending, but I have a question to ask: When you say your saving the best for a fully-fledged book series, does that mean you are becoming a legit author? And that The chosen one is going to be an actual book series? Because if it's true I'd try to buy it immediately because holy hell are you a good author.

Quite the ending. So many goodbyes.

The goodbye between Aya and Kari was very loving. The final confrontation between Elizabeth and Toshiro was unexpectedly calm. The Toshiko ending was just unexpected, but nice. I kinda saw the part with Yuki and Kuji getting their own human bodies coming. The godly bargain sale was amusing. The biggest surprise was the Livy and Yoshika part. I give you a thumbs up!

Very well done! The story was well worth reading.

Good luck with your book series. Great ending. I never could have predicted that Livy and Yoshika would merge. I can't wait to read the follow up story.

Nice somber ending. Nothing more needed.

ok i am SOOOOO looking forward to what you have planned

great chapter

awe i love how you ended this one

This has been a great story. I eagerly await the final chapter.

Damn well written story! Love how you write, it was very enjoyable!

That was lovely

Damit i love your writing! Keep up the good work:3

Very deep chapter. I would be lying if I said I wasn't surprised by how you wrote Toshiro to handle his "problems" in this chapter.

The biggest icing on the cake is Simone. That was very nice. And, lol, "Shoulda woulda, fuck it."

Interesting way to end the Neuroi. Neat. I give it a thumbs up.

wow is all ill say here

So that's the end or is there in store?