Reviews for The Forgotten One
Rehan Acraman chapter 3 . 5/2
next chapter plssss..
It's kinda sad to see this fanfic cut off when it's starting to get interesting...
Rehan Acraman chapter 3 . 4/5
please continue this story
I'm really curious on its continuation..
Bob2121998 chapter 3 . 12/18/2017
i read the first two chapters and they are great i hope you continue this story along with 'the celestial dragon' story as well.
Mata1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2017
imho, this story is much more enjoyable than The Celestial Dragon. A real shame you stopped writing this.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
I hate you, this story was getting good and you stopped it at the worse possible time, i want to know what happens next!
Pancake Fury chapter 3 . 10/9/2016
Update plz and I don't freakin' get why they always do these info things at the last chapter or the 3rd like CMMMOOOONNN
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Update please
TinyC chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
Are you gunna do another chapter
ZechReading chapter 3 . 4/22/2016
Will you still continue this or no? The Celestial Dragon is very far from this :/
xxOblivionxxx chapter 2 . 1/19/2016
Oh man this is so shity why almost all of characters that are more old and powerful then the fucking motherfucker void of mutherfucking begining of times have to go to school to bend in society? You know that sounds very shity and lacks lots of imagination.
Why not live in las vegas and play your every day poker and win lots of money cheating with supernatural powers inst betters then deal with a bunch of teenagers they could even travel in space and discover aliens for all i care but if you dont want to be detected by the supernatural because is troblousome there are a lot more easy ways than going in a school that have devils, and at the same time create a plot of your won its way more entertainment.
Sasuke75249 chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
nice what happens next
L.B.N chapter 3 . 1/18/2016
Sorry New Story,its just because i read A lot of chapters I get confuse on which to put Story or Chapter
L.B.N chapter 3 . 1/18/2016
Can't wait for your new chapter
Mike Kromer chapter 2 . 12/9/2015
Love it so far. Keep it up. This will get interesting I'm shure lol. Gotta have more asap.
TheLaughingStalk chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
Nooo! I need more! This is going quite nicely. It would be a shame for this story to end so abruptly.
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