Reviews for The Secrets Inside Us
The Reviewer chapter 51 . 7/25/2018
I really enjoyed this story. I hope that you finish it entirely. I also enjoyed your other South Park stories, especially the Everything Changes series.
Shadow chapter 50 . 12/28/2016
This made me so sad :( I hate good byes. But it was so beautifully written. Thank you for the feels.
RandomWriter197 chapter 50 . 12/17/2016
Waghhhhhh! It's so sad But I'm glad everyone kind of got there own happy ending

Great update and I'm guessing ending, man all your stories are amazing.
WilliamOmega chapter 50 . 12/16/2016
One of the best fics i've ever read. I have been following this story for almost 2 years now (with my other account) and this ending chapter is so emotional and amazing. Thank you. For this absolute masterpiece.
Guest chapter 49 . 12/15/2016
I thought Kenny's dad died of drunk driving a few chapters ago.
Guest chapter 51 . 12/14/2016
Amazing story, amazing storytelling and amazing writing. I absolutely loved how this turned out in the end. A 10/10 and definitely an all time favorite of mine. Continue to write.
Smarvin chapter 51 . 12/13/2016
Wow, that was a lot of things. Poetic, heartwarming, heartbreaking, nostalgic (Jews don't have rhythm is probably one of my favorite SP jokes) and so much more.

This ending, it really hit me in the feels. Which is a good thing; if writing doesn't stir emotions, then it's doing something wrong. This story, and that ending, did things so, so right. Sure, it wasn't a happy ending for everyone, but that's real life. Things don't always end perfectly for everyone, and we don't always get closure. Life keeps moving, and we all have to move on with it at some point. That's probably what I loved the most about this story-you painted a picture of reality and showed us the true, and often hidden, side of pain, loss, relationships, and so much more.

Thank you for writing such a great story, and once again, I'm sorry for not being around to show support for much of the story. If you write more South Park in the future, then I'll make sure to be here for it.
cosmotarian chapter 50 . 12/13/2016
What a disappointing ending. You should have given Stan and Kyle's friendship a second chance. Maybe have them go to the same college together or something.
Smarvin chapter 49 . 11/13/2016
Hey, I'm back! Member me?

Wow, I just don't know what to say; I love this story!

I think because of the route you took with this story, addressing all these issues that many, including yours truly, have seen happen close to them, really helps readers to connect to the story more. Just a thought, but I think it's one of the things your story really has going for it. It's realistic, gripping, and really stirs up the emotions.

Keep up the great work, and I really look forward to more! (Oh, and I promise to not disappear from reading/reviewing for a year again)
cosmotarian chapter 49 . 9/28/2016
As a Style shipper, I'm sure you know how I want this to turn out. However, even if they don't end up together, I hope you can at least restore their super best friendship. Maybe have Stan apologize to Kyle for being such a dick.
Darkslayer18 chapter 49 . 9/26/2016
Gtfo noah! I don't trust you as far as I can .-_-
Oh and I love Kyle and his mom bonding and coming terms about him being gay. It was really sweet when she was talking about that girl she use to like. We need some style bromance in here already at the very least though! All the feels...
RandomWriter197 chapter 49 . 9/26/2016
Everything is slowly coming together, though Bebe and Kenny need to work on there trust issues. I wonder what Cartman is up to I doubt it'll be anything bad. Very good story can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 49 . 9/25/2016
That was a lovely scene with Douglas and Stan. Nice to see Kyle's family slowly accepting his choices too.
Please keep up the awesome work.
RandomWriter197 chapter 48 . 9/4/2016
Really good update I feel like this is close to ending soon which is a shame. I think Kyle should go on a date with Noah or something to help him get over Stan. Good update can't wait for the next one
Darkslayer18 chapter 48 . 9/2/2016
Aww Stan :( I figured your issues were about to come to bear. And i don't "hate" the Noah guy, but he kinda gives me a creepy vibe. I also don't like how he barely knows Kyle and is trying to tell him to break away from Stan. That is the last thing the two of them need! They need to talk to each other and be honest and see where the pieces fall! I love the painful feels this story makes me for each characters story lines. My heart broke for each of them in turn. And it seems like most of the people are starting to come to grips with their own issues but I don't think Stan has truly faced his yet.
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