I hope you finish this; it’s fascinating and you ended with a cliffhanger!

Please update

Nice

This is actually amazing the spelling and grammatical style is flawless. I do however recommend better spacing of paragraphs as is it's a bit hard to read.

I'd advise a new paragraph with single return when an idea is finished or a new person begins speaking, and a triple return on a scene change. This gives the reader a kind of checkpoint making the piece able to be easily picked up after a break.

(P.s this is more personal choice but chapters I'd advise being no more then 20-25k words, either ending when a plot point does or on a pivotal scene if you wanna be "that guy". Doing so not only cuts the story into easily digestible chunks it also makes it so you get more reviews A.K.A visibly in the filters, and letting you update more frequently, along with the fact if you have/get a beta reader you won't murder them.)

Suspense is killing me

That's a great Fanfiction

The formatting is horrible to be honest.

First person fics are also rather annoying to read. They usually come off as fairly melodramatic and boring. Taking away from the seperation of the characters and their stories. We don't need to be put in their shoes. After all, it is a memory or a dream of a memory. A could have been like when Connor helped the piece of Eden and had a vision of a world of what-ifs.

What? new chapter and I didn't notice it?

Awesome story. Man you got me hooked. But I only read it Because I know you give a great story.
And letting us hang there with that revelation. Wow.

Use some spacing. It's damn hard to read on computer or on Tablet. It's not a joke. It's something you should do. You have an amazing story and I can imagine you pour a lot of time in it. But you're just ruining it like this. And that's a damn shame.
Saluut.

It has been a long time since you update! But the story still amazing as the one before!

Very good chapter and really good twist, however I should point out that by 1796, the Bastille had already been demolished and destroyed, meaning it can't realistically be in this story, as technically it should no longer exist. Demolition of the Bastille began after the castle was taken in 1789 by the Revolutioneres, and the only reason it wasn't shown as such in the game was because the games engine prevented them from doing that.

You bloody bastard. Updating this and not telling me in advance! *scoffs*

With all you've written, you could have sequels to Unity and more. Doing a great job. Hope you update soon!

This is one of the best stories ever! Thank you for this gigantic piece of work! :)

Okay this is honestly the BEST story that I have ever read on fanfiction hands down! You're such a great writer and AC Unity is definitely my favourite AC game but the tragic ending messed me up so I'm glad that this exists. Hope you update this amazing story more because I can't wait! I LOVE IT!