You did AMAZING! I actually can't see through the tears in my eyes. You didn't need pictures to show what was happening, just your mere descriptions sent chills down my spine. And the emotion you put it in was so well done, I can't help but smile. You did an AMAZING job.

How did you write this so well?! I'm actually crying, and it's rare that books make me cry. You did AMAZING!

I'm gonna cry

You got my teeth chattering!

That sounds TERRIFYING. By the way, when Shadow said "f****** robots" I got Clementine vibes.

If Eggman of all people is calling this guy maf, I am officially worried.

I think you made less than 5 grammatical mistakes on this in total. Incredible. Your imagery is Ryan of amazing. You give enough context clues for anyone to figure out words that otherwise would need a dictionary to understand.
I cannot praise your work enough! You have writing skills sadly lacking anywhere online for fan fiction.

I thought that was a ref to Chaos Bound. Nice.

Oh...Fleetway.

OOHH MA GAWD!

Yo I made some Fan art for this chapter avajavans

I adore this story!
The plot twists and character interactions are incredible. The plot is well paced and captivating while the action is thrilling.

Literally crying right now this book is amazing thank you for keeping me up at night XD

God, you are so talented I felt like I was on a long roller coaster ride XD

I've never been so much in love. Omg this book is so outstanding. I LOVE YOUR WORK AND HARD DEDICATION