Hope to read more soon.

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I absolutely love this story can't wait till the next chapter.

I don't remember how many times I have read this and still wish to see a new chapter

I finally remade my account in order to properly say hello and take responsibility of my reviews (it's ya Bat, btw). Hello, and thank you for a lovely story. I'm anxiously looking forward to reading more of your superb work.

Much love as always,
Bat

Fuck. I’m just so nervous now that Tonks is going to kill someone and that everyone will suffer again. I’m seriously praying so hard that that is some how foiled, that someone, ANYONE, is able to save whomever she harms (if not blocking the shot before it reaches its target!). They just came back, surely, dear lovely author, you won’t take them away from this new life so soon? I hope not.

I love the details that describe the offerings and happenings of the end of Yule celebration. Especially Lee’s connection to Loki’s idol as that was really lovely and makes me excited for what it might suggest for the future.

I’m so eagerly waiting for another installment of your excellence. I hope to read a new chapter of yours as soon as you can physically write it.

As always, in love with your work and in awe of your brilliance,
Bat

Your writing is just so excellent. You use such poignant diction that truly cuts to the heart of the matter without superfluous words that meander to the point. I feel like I learn a new word or a new usage of a word with every paragraph. Also, to your growing ever-taller credit, you include historical or mythological tidbits that simply enhance what you’d already written and provide depth to the history of the world you’re weaving. I love that you used the story of Wild Hunts to buttress the tradition and history behind Yule hunts; it’s simply awe-inspiring and just further draws me into this world, supporting my suspension of any disbelief.

You connect the world of your story so nicely with real parts of our world’s history and lore, supporting J.K. Rowling’s world as a by-product (because although your story’s foundations are her stories, you have altered and woven a lovely alternative world that truly is your own).

I’m in love with Arthur’s connection to Tom and their really sweet, hidden courtship. I’m simply vibrating with excitement for more installments on how their relationship progresses after 20 years of coerced separation.

I’m just so in love with your story and I do hope that you continue to write because your writing talent is 1 in 7 billion (our world’s population if you didn't realize) and it’s clear that no one else can write as lovely as you can do, seemingly effortlessly.

You’re amazing. I hope dearly that you know the worth of your ability and how exceptional of a person you are. I’m excited to keep on reading your work, as always.

Have a lovely day, you deserve all of them.

Much love and joy,
Bat

UGH! EVERY CHAPTER. YOU JUST FUCKING NAIL IT. IT’S ALWAYS SO BEAUTIFULLY PUT AND I JUST DIE FROM ITS SHEER MAGNIFICENCE. I LOVE the bits of humor you’ve managed to include, like how Harry commands the order to be for the memories, but I also love the way you describe emotions. It’s just... so great...

Keep up the great work! I’m loving every single chapter (though I don’t really have the energy to write a review after every single one, know that I would give you all of the money in the world to keep writing because you have a GIFT), each chapter is still SO AMAZING and 100000% deserves a billion reviews on how excellent and top-notch your skills are.

Thank you for a lovely chapter, AS ALWAYS! You consistently fucking god-like, magical author.

Much love and amazement, as always,
Bat

I fucking LOVE your writing style! It’s just so good! I especially love how you transitioned from original version of the past to them realizing time-travel memories. It’s fucking brilliant.

You’re a fucking boss.

Much applaud as always,
Bat

This chapter is so fucking beautiful writing. The descriptions truly paint the picture of this world and how the characters all have gotten to where they are at this moment in such a lovely way. I’ve read this story before a few years ago and so havent seen the most resent updates but fuck, this chapter gets to me every time and is so fucking exquisite. I fucking know that this isn’t the end for them but I’m still crying because the emotions in this story are expressed so nicely to help the reader empathize with the characters (mostly Ron). It’s just so heartbreakingly beautiful. You’re a fucking writing god.

Thank you for writing such a masterpiece of a first chapter, I’m looking forward to reading up to your latest update again!

Much love and awe,
Bat

The Light triumphed. And moved to eradicate the Dark. Harry, Ron & Neville, among others killed for The Greater Good returned to reset the balance.

Very interesting! It is so interesting to see all the changes coming into play.

Please update soon

Please update soon. I’m soooo interested in this story thanks for sharing.

OMG. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon

I would love to see a snippet of how it went with Bill and the pack or just more Charlie. Maybe he meets Fluer by chance. I would like to see more Percy and Adrian and Graham. They are such a cute trio. I await the next update.