To lazy to log in. Enjoying the story but kinda wish Harry would morph into Xan because I've never read a story where he did. As for me , I'm an avid reader can't write. Thanks for sharing.

I love your story! It's very well-written. And just like you I also hate Dumbledore for being a manipulative bastard. I hope you continue this!

Since its not "Harry-is-Xanxus" specifically, can you do a Xanxus/Harry? There's only a small amount of good fic with that pairing and I want to see if you can do it since this fic is amazing! Just a suggestion tho, no pressure. Hehe

Btw Załatwić (polish) does not mean bribe etc. Its more of an incomplete word meaning to have completed, finished something.

And awesome story!

I love the story! Great job on it, I can’t wait to see where it goes.

Harry probably has either cloud or mist flames in this story. I can confirm this decision because in cannon (if you follow it somewhat.), harry was a very protective person, even if he was easily influenced. Clouds are often called the sentinels of any group. Harry would be like skull, actively protecting one territory (people in both of there cases) from harm and working hard to prepare them for any threat. This is shown when harry and his golden duo, create the DA club when Umbridge refused and neglected to teach any important skills to defend one self. Let go on a small rant here. There are more threats in the wizarding world than just Voldemort. There are magical creatures, curses, hexes, rituals, and day to day mishaps that could critically injure or kill them if they are not prepared. Fine, don't teach the powerful and dangerous spells, but at least she could teach the defensive spells that could most likely save their lives if they encounter a beast like a wild dragon or a boggart (even if they covered that already, practice would help.). Clouds often clash with other people, like when kyoya attacks any who break or disturb his rules, and skull who is often used as a living target. But harry doesn't do that, similarly mist are also very protective, like viper with money, and mukuro with chrome and later on, tsuna. Both mist and clouds are sentinels but the big difference is that clouds diverge all attention onto themselves for a small or large amount of time, and mists change an enemies perspective to fit ones need. Harry often, though not on purpose, had attention put on him self or nearby surroundings when something got to much for his friends. like when he temporally stopped the war when he fought with Voldemort, and when he faced the basilisk alone and was able to not only protect his friends from Mr. Lockhart, but also save Ginny from being killed by the giant venomous snake that could turn you to stone with one look. He subconsciously tries to protects his friends from any dangers and successfully has attention diverged a way to help him and his Little army. though he show qualities of a sky and a lighting as well, like how the hat said he would make a good Slytherin (because of his leadership quality), and harry also showed us that he was more resilient to magical attacks because of his slightly larger magic capacity serving as a buffer between the attacks and his core (where I believe most attacks flow at because a wizards magical core is like a representation of ones life, the larger it is the longer they live if they stay safe.). I think that covered it all. sorry if some is inaccurate, its been awhile since I read the actual story, I'm just going off the top of my head. wonderful story by the way, not sure if you can read this, first time I have ever done this. wow, I just realized how long this is. have a good life.

I thought Harry was a Sky. Hmmm. I don’t think his personality or his history fits Xanxus. Maybe a rival Famiglia? Don’t know. Once Ottabio has an accident, may Harry will be a cloudy sky, and fit into Xanxus’s guardian. Ooo, maybe he joins Varia, and hides he has flames, or that he’s a sun or...yep, still don’t know. Lots of fun.

Thanks

I would pick number 2, personally.

You are entitled to your opinion however, to claim that everything one hears about a given place is true is very rude, because you are making assumptions about others that live in that place.

On to your story, there are few grammatical errors that kill the flow of the story. Personally, I don’t see the point of all the created names, and the constant insertion of their definition is very annoying.

Harry seems a bit OP but I take it that’s because he has flames as well.

It seems you’ve decided to make him a Sky, I have never watched the show, so while I disagree that the Harry you’ve created would be a sky, I’ll defer to you since I’m sure you’ve seen the show or read the manga.

I really hope to see this turn into a chapter soon. Looking forward to see where you are taking the story! :-)

By the way just so you won't be disappointed: Anyone who comments on your note, won't be able to comment on the chapter that will most likely replace this note later on. Have seen people being confused about that a lot, so I thought I should warn you about that in advance.

Cool

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

looking forward to more. its a good story and i people think harry will be xanxus cos of the whole trash and scum its and only referring to his aunt by name showing some for of respect and the fact you said you where toying with the idea makes people think thats what will happen

Ah, reread your story and people are reading too deeply into the little guessing game at the end of chapter 4.

Great story so far, whatever direction you take it in eventually.

I honestly think it would be cooler for Harry to meet Xanxas myself. There arent very many good fics like that nowadays but whatever you decide to do is oki dokie with me. I will still be a faithful reader. _